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Fantasy LeagueEdit

The link to the fantasy league is right here: Total Drama Tropics - Fantasy League. Have fun if you decide to join. Please don't comment in this section of this talk page as I'd like for it to be an easy to find link to the Fantasy League.


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Who is your favorite character to be eliminated before the final ten (in order of elimination)?
 
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Who is your favorite character to make it to the final ten (in alphabetical order)?
 
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Winner Guessing ContestEdit

Like last time, put your name next to the character you think will win. Only one guesser for a character is allowed, and you may not change your guess until your character is eliminated in the story. The prize will be that you can choose a character from Total Drama Tropics to appear in the All-Star story.


Al - Fanfiction2010Do you have endurance?Betcha million dollars ya don't! Or do you? I'm going insane! AAAHHH! Fanfiction2010 21:32, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Audrey II - Author999 20:20, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Beau - My litte mons†ers! talk contributions 19:44, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Creigh - Reddude 21:42, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Dante - --DJ Spenstar! 21:15, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Emmy - Shane

Frederick -TDIwriter 21:06, February 1, 2010 (UTC) (Since my first three choices were already taken)

Hae Won - Hae WON XD GM likes Cyan! Maroon is the new Green! CrimsonMagic01 20:29, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Isaiah ---Kenzen - The Potato Min! TA-DOO! 21:07, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Janice -Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 21:54, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Logan -Nad331

Marguerite -User:Darkdonpatch

Patsy - I is Tdi! Don't Call My Name I isn't Alejandro 03:17, February 2, 2010 (UTC) I had SO much of a choice XD

Renee - --If you fall asleep, you lose the game. 23:56, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sebastian -- The Anonymous User 21:37, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sky Lynn - --Koops is here! Let's sit down and talk! What I do here! Let's blog!

Stacy - Nonny

Topher - --Cards777Wanna chat?Cyan is COOL!!!! 21:05, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Willow - BocaJ's the name,Comedy's my game.Go ahead and chat with me. 22:36, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yancy - Chimchar2356025

Final Three GuessingEdit

Make your guess for who you think the final three will be. You may change your guess whenever, but please strike out your former guess, as opposed to replacing it, so I can clearly see the date you posted it. If you are incorrect, and out of the guessing, you may make a new guess. Guessing ends at the chapter where the final four is announced, unless otherwise stated. The first person to guess the final three correctly gets to make a character for story four. You may proceed with your guesses.

Audrey II, Willow, Al TDIwriter 22:14, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Audrey II, Sebastian, Dante --DJ Spenstar! 22:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, this is probably incorrect, but here'e my guess: Sky Lynn, Creigh, and Sebastian Cards777LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶ 22:21, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Creigh, Dante, and Renee Happy April!Come talk with me and I'll give your town rain.Cya (N) 22:26, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Emmy, Sebastian and Dante- The Anonymous User 22:33, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sebastian, Sky Lynn, and Patsy. Goldenshane 22:43, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Audrey II, Creigh, and Dante. - Copper5

Emmy, Creigh, Yancy JASONcontributionstalk 20:44, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Renee, Dante, Al? Show me how to lie, you're getting better all the time... 18:41, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Creigh, Renee, Audrey IIReddy!!:) :( :D xD DX >:D ;( ;)Reddy loves emotioncons. 23:54, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Dante, and Willow Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:35, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Emmy, Sebastian and Yancy--TDA Lindsay fan1 21:21, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Audrey II, Sebastian and Willow. - Copper5

Sebastian, Sky Lynn, and Renee! Cards777LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶ 22:46, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Willow, Renee, Yancy. --Elimination! Redemption! COKEMAN11! 23:11, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yancy, Willow, Al --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 00:15, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Renee, Audrey II, Al. Boring sig. 18:52, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Dante, Al, Yancy--Kenzen Eleven! 19:19, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dante, Audrey II, Yancy [[User:Weblykinly|HINT: A AWESOME PERSON]] 19:24, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Emmy, Dante, and Sky Lynn.- The Anonymous User 19:40, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sky Lynn, Yancy, and Renee Goldenshane 20:01, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sky Lynn, Al, and Yancy KoopaKidJr. 20:17, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dante, Emmy, Al --DJ Spenstar! 20:46, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sky Lynn, Audrey II, and Al. Cards777LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶ 23:22, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Willow, Emmy? o.O All around me are familliar faces, worn out places, worn out faces... 18:12, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Emmy, Renee and Al?- The Anonymous User 19:11, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Emmy, Willow- [[User:Weblykinly|HINT: A AWESOME PERSON]] 19:31, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Renee, Willow - Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:57, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sky Lyn, Yancy, Audrey II --DJ Spenstar! 21:27, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Emmy, Yancy, and Al? -Lalainee 21:36, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Audrey II, Emmy. Boring sig. 18:44, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Emmy, Sky Lynn and Al?- The Anonymous User 19:02, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Al , Willow, and Audrey II Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:25, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Yancy, and Audrey II Cards777LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶ 01:19, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Emmy and Yancy? (I'm running out of options!)- The Anonymous User 02:00, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Al, Yancy, Willow --DJ Spenstar! 11:21, May 18, 2010 (UTC) (already guessed)

Whoever guessed something first will be the winner. There won't be a prize for those who repeated a guess (sorry, guys). SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 14:56, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations, Nonny! You guessed the final three, right! You get to make a character for story four. It can be male or female, that's up to you. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 14:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

ChatEdit

Yes i cant wait--Kenzen met Pure Evil Her name was....Sunshine (JK to the Ravioli) 01:15, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Sweet title! --DJ Spenstar! 01:15, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. *deletes that thing about Doug* SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 01:16, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


How did that get there--Kenzen met Pure Evil Her name was....Sunshine (JK to the Ravioli) 01:32, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


YAY! Sprink, can I make the elimination chart? (When the story begins) --Jason Here! Talk 01:18, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


This was the name of a camp before, but it had been deleted. It had a tiny talk page that I didn't realize was there. I think I'll make the elimination chart, Jason, but thanks for the offer. Did you have something in mind for it? SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 01:20, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


No, I was just thinking..I was kind of bored. Well, I was kind of trying to help you...like if you were like...uh...busy? Idk...This is awkward xD --Jason Here! Talk 01:23, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for the offer. Lol. I won't make it until teams are announced. SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 01:27, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Sweet, it's up. *Roots for Beau* TDIwriter 01:27, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Well, I'm looking foward to it :). I'm rooting for Audrey ll! --Jason Here! Talk 01:28, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Dangit! This used to be a camp (I think...) , and I was gonna use it for my season 2, but, oh well. Can't wait for it to start. =D -- Tyedye0126! Call me Tye, though, I don't like being too formal. 01:32, January 24, 2010 (UTC)



Audrey II FTW!! --DJ Spenstar! 01:35, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Al FTW!!!! Fanfiction2010Do you have endurance?Betcha million dollars ya don't! Or do you? I'm going insane! AAAHHH! 01:37, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


I can't wait for this. Yay! BocaJ's the name,Comedy's my game.Go ahead and chat with me. 01:47, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, everyone. And Tye, I don't know who started it originally. The name just sprang into my mind a little before I posted it. Sorry for using the name, though, but I like it. SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 02:34, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Yay, more Sprink stuff! ^^ She's a rebel, She's a saint, She's the salt of the earth, and she's dangerous! 02:55, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


When camps were still allowed here, this was the name of my camp...O.O --If you fall asleep, you lose the game. 03:29, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Chimmy. Cokeman... It was you? I knew it was a camp but I didn't know who made it. I was so disappointed that the name was taken after I thought of it, but glad to see that it had been deleted. I hope you don't mind my using it. SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 03:48, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Sebastian FTW! You know what? I'm going to hop on the bandwagon while I have time today and post my initial rankings of the TDTropics cast!- The Anonymous User 15:35, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


I can't wait for this to start!


Turnertang 18:58, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah, you can use it. I'm working on a name for TDK season 3, and TDT isn't what I'm going for. XD --If you fall asleep, you lose the game. 21:46, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Cokeman. Thanks, Turnertang. And TAU, that would be cool. I hope to have the next character up today. Probably later as I've been working on "iRene" and Tsuyoshi's profiles, so I need a little break. SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 21:52, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Who's Joanie? Fanfiction2010Do you have endurance?Betcha million dollars ya don't! Or do you? I'm going insane! AAAHHH!21:54, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Random for this page, but she was the little girl that Tsuyoshi befriended in the "Spite & Hate Plus 8" chapter. SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 21:55, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Oh, now I remember that! Fanfiction2010Do you have endurance?Betcha million dollars ya don't! Or do you? I'm going insane! AAAHHH!21:56, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


I can't wait for this! Goldenshane 22:14, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks! On an interesting note, I typed Total Drama Reality into a search engine and found a story (or something) called Total Drama Reality: The Tropics. O_o I searched for that after naming this story, though. SprinklemistSend me a message.Or not... 05:03, January 28, 2010 (UTC)


*randomly appears on talk page* Weird, Sprink... --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 22:02, January 28, 2010 (UTC)


Where did you come from? XD It even has Total Drama: Boney Island's ":". SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:04, January 28, 2010 (UTC)


Wow. I wonder if there's a connection. XD. BTW, awesome new sig. --DJ Spenstar! 22:35, January 28, 2010 (UTC)


I don't know when the other story started, but it was coincidental on my part. And thanks, I haven't changed my sig in a very long time. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:37, January 29, 2010 (UTC)


IK that. XD --DJ Spenstar! 20:45, January 29, 2010 (UTC)


Tropical Chat (XD)Edit

Sweet first chapter Sprink! --Koops is here! Let's sit down and talk! What I do here! Let's blog!


LOL..most of my favorites are on the Epic Failures XD Can you feel the rhythm in my heart, the beat's going düm tek tek! 18:58, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Wow, Logan's just so, wow. I really like Logan now. I also still love Emmy! Anyway, I'm thinking that Beau and Logan will be friends. Don't ask me why I think that, I just do.... Goldenshane 19:27, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


I really liked chapter one! Great job! One thing; I feel like Sabastion was focused on alot. My litte mons†ers! talk contributions 19:43, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, everyone. Sorry about Sebastian. It's what I had planned for him. It will be more even in the future, but for chapter one I felt he had to be focused on. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:28, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Great way to start the season! Turnertang 20:50, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


awesome first chappy! After this chapter, I gotta say, I like Dante, Isiah, Sebastian, and that french girl (xD)more than I thought. Yancy, not so much, same with Pasty. Oh yeah, do you find it common for a person with Asperger's to mention the syndrome to you as part of a first impression? Because I have never seen anybody do that, nor would I when meeting anyone. Just saying... --DJ Spenstar! 20:56, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


The epic failures... BEST TEAM NAME EVER!!! xD --DJ Spenstar! 20:58, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


I agree with spenny. Theres a kid in my class that has that syndrome and he is really uncomforatable talking about it. Spenny, chatango? I has good news. My litte mons†ers! talk contributions 21:01, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


In the context of a reality show, I figured she would find it necessary to get out of the way. In other words, she would rather people know then to have them judge her bahavior without knowing. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:04, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Maybe... I've never seen someone with AS on a reality show before, so... yeah. xD. Though It'd be a bit more realistic on Audrey II's end if it were Chris who said it, or Sebastian who deduced it, or both. --DJ Spenstar! 21:07, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Great first chapter, Sprink. Of course, I'm judging it on a curve, since it's the intro chapter. I have a few theories formed in my head, mostly involving the winner, and how the teams will preform. I was right, Beau does remind me of myself. Dante is pretty cool, right now, as he isn't as bad as I thought he would be. Yancy is win, but I think I prefer my Yancy over yours, no offense. TDIwriter 21:09, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


I've seen a girl with Asperger's on a reality show. She did something similar. She talked to the hosts about it, and then she told the other contestants. I think it was right away, with no hosts around. Again........ Each individual is different. XD TDIwriter, thanks. :) I didn't like your Yancy until the end(ish). And Lol we're comparing Yancy's. Spenstar... The rules state that you can't change your guess in the winner guessing contest... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:12, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


sorry. --DJ Spenstar! 21:14, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for changing it back. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:17, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


you're welcome. And about Audrey II... I supose you have a point. But it still would have been funny for Sebastian to have deduced it first. xD --DJ Spenstar! 21:18, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Maybe... But the chapter was already pretty Sebastian-centric. Audrey II isn't quite like that later on, but just to introduce her, I wanted everyone to know and honestly... I'm not sure Sebastian could deduce it. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:24, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


yah, you're right about that... I'm not going to win this, am I? xD --DJ Spenstar! 21:25, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry, I put a ton of thought into this. I'm not trying to sound argumentative. I'm trying to explain. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:31, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Really great chapter, Sprink, as I was expecting it to be. I really like a lot of the characters, already. My fave is probably Sky Lynn, as of now. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 21:32, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Was Epic Fail from something I said in a blog for the Epic Failures? Just wondering. Fanfiction2010Do you have endurance?Betcha million dollars ya don't! Or do you? I'm going insane! AAAHHH! Fanfiction2010 21:33, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


No, Sam. I don't remember that, but Epic Fail is a pretty common phrase. Nonny, thanks. It's pretty nervracking to start an entirely new story and getting people to accept it. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:36, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Great first chapter! I like the team names...sorta. I hope the Failures' name is a misnomer, I like most of them more than the Onslaught.- The Anonymous User 21:40, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Oh just all the time at my school, this one kid says "Epic fail!" or "YOU FAILED EPICALLY!" and I've said it like three times on blogs. Fanfiction2010Do you have endurance?Betcha million dollars ya don't! Or do you? I'm going insane! AAAHHH!21:43, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Wait...I just realized this...Sebastian is trilingual! He speaks English, Japanese and French!?- The Anonymous User 21:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


I thought that was logical, as he is Canadian. Not that everyone there knows it, but since he already knew English and Japanese, I felt French was a given. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:51, February 1, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome first chapter Sprink! Well, I mean, awesome third first chapter Sprink! I feel sorry for Logan... he reminds me of, me. BocaJ's the name,Comedy's my game.Go ahead and chat with me. 00:18, February 2, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry about that. He's a pretty sympathetic character here...SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:23, February 2, 2010 (UTC)


Lol, I guess she had three boats to get off of. BocaJ's the name,Comedy's my game.Go ahead and chat with me. 04:26, February 2, 2010 (UTC)


It was three sentences that started with "She steps off of the boat..." XD It was a pretty funny mistake, and should have landed her on the Epic Failures. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 04:37, February 2, 2010 (UTC)


Logan will be ignored to the finals XD--Kenzen - The Potato Min! TA-DOO! 05:30, February 4, 2010 (UTC)


Who? XD I was planning on discontinuing chapter summaries, as a heads up... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:33, February 5, 2010 (UTC)


But chapter sumeries are for the people who cant read full chapters (XD) The page seems empty without an elimanation Chart--Kenzen - The Potato Min! EPIC-MOO (COWS FTW)! 01:58, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


True, it does seem empty... I guess I could put it up before Monday, even though there's no elimination yet, and it will be blank. The team colors will be announced. I actually have them planned already. I probably won't make it until tomorrow or Sunday. Knowing me I 'll decide to do it right now after posting this... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:59, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


Is it wierd if I picked a winner, that wasn't my favorite? Like, I really think he is going to win; rather than picking my fav. My little mons†ers! talk contributions 03:02, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


That's completely fine, Jason. It's better to go with your brain than your heart... At least when it comes to these guessing contests... Sometimes... Unlees going with your heart would have made you win... Anyway, What team should I list first? I don't want people to be all "Well, he listed that team first so that means the winner will be on that team!" or "He listed that team second so he's trying to trick us into thinking that team will not have the winner." Whoever picks what team should be listed first, first is how it will be listed. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:08, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


The Onslaught should be listed first, because their team name was picked first.- The Anonymous User 03:10, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


I was thinking the Epic Failuires. In the alphabete, they come first. My little mons†ers! talk contributions 03:13, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


Ooo, alphabetical... But TAU wins! Congratulations TAU. I'll start on it right away... Like I said I wouldn't. Names will be listed alphabetically on their team as always. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:14, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


And the winner of total drama tropics is................. WHAT THE HACK TYOSHIE ALREADY WON TOTAL DRAMA REALITY--Kenzen - The Potato Min! EPIC-MOO (COWS FTW)! 03:25, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


What's the deal with TDR elimination chart? BocaJ's the name,Comedy's my game.Go ahead and chat with me. 03:34, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


I copied and pasted and then worked on it. I saved it so it would be easier to update as this computer is slow when a lot of words are on the page. Do the colors look nice. I may change them around later. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:41, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


They look nice. BocaJ's the name,Comedy's my game.Go ahead and chat with me. 03:54, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. I might make the Onslaught a light green and the safe color a sandy color instead. I'll see what that looks like when the first elimination happens. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:38, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


That chapter was amaaaaazing, maaan. My favorite part was probably how Stacy was the only person who noticed Logan, at least at first. Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 19:37, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, TBTIDF. I'm glad you liked it, maaaan. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:59, February 6, 2010 (UTC)


I feel so bad for Logan. Only C-Bass noticed in the beginning. I think I also like Renee since she and Logan are similar. At least Logan was noticed somewhat by the Onslaught. Goldenshane 18:58, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Hae Won Lost WOW that is shocking--Kenzen - The Potato Min! EPIC-MOO (COWS FTW)! 19:25, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


I was wrong, so very wrong! Author999 19:36, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Epic chapter, Sprink! Audrey II is so far an accurate representation of myself, I feel really bad for Logan, and Topher seems like someone I'd like! ^^ Can you feel the rhythm in my heart, the beat's going düm tek tek! 20:39, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, guys. I'm glad you like it so far. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:43, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Oh yeah, I forgot to mention...I really like Creigh. It makes me feel contented to know that someone with a disabillity has the guts to compete in a reality show...he reminds me of how I feel when people judge me without knowledge of my disorder, and when they do find out, they try to avoid me.... Can you feel the rhythm in my heart, the beat's going düm tek tek! 20:47, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter, Sprink! I love Al, LOL. XD I really can't wait for more, I can already tell this is going to be an awesome season. ^^ --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:58, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Sunshine. And Chimmy, that's really cool. I felt Creigh was really normal and viewed as such by the others, then suddenly the view changed, even though nothing about him changed. With Audrey II, I wanted to incorporate prejudging into her story, but I slightly covered that with Yi Min and Jonathan. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:41, February 8, 2010 (UTC)



*hugs Chimmy* It can be hard for anyone to deal with being judged for something (especially something beyond their control). But there are also understanding people who don't care. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:04, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter. It was so awesome that you left me speechless. Way to go Sprink! *Glares* Now I can't talk! XQ BocaJ's the name,Comedy's my game.Go ahead and chat with me. 22:09, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


I LOVE Audrey II. It really pulled on my heart-strings when Dante insulted her. She reminds me alot of myself. - Copper5


Amazing chapter Sprink! I just had a change of heart regarding Dante though, when he called Audrey II a freak. DANTE IS GOING DOWN!! xD --DJ Spenstar! 22:28, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter! I loved the challenge! I want Patsy win! Turnertang 22:41, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Really great chapter, Sprink. Patsy was really funny, along with a couple others. However, there's one thing I'm still wondering about... why did Dante stop acting mean after Logan brought up discrimination? Judging by his comment to Fredrick, "Is it wrong to think that guy is hot?" I think he might've been discriminated against when he was younger, possibly for being gay. But that's just a theory. It's probably wrong. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 23:01, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter! I loved it! My faves are: Dante, Al, Topher, Audrey II, and Sky Lynn! (In no order!) Cards777Wanna chat?Cyan is COOL!!!! 23:14, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, everyone. :) Nonny, I don't think I'm revealing anything by saying that that's not why Dante stopped. He isn't gay. His comment was only meant to acknowledge that even the guys realize how hot Beau is. Since he seemed like one of the least likely to admit, I chose him. He stopped discrimnating against Creigh because he was called out. He was blatantly discriminating against him, but he didn't want his team to think that. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:22, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Ah... I was hoping to uncover some deep meaning about Dante, as I feel as though there is one. He seems too... stereotypical for one of your stories. Whatever, I'm sure he'll make it far, and get some development. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 23:26, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Or get Ruth'd. xD *hopes for that because he insulted Audrey II* Also, Audrey II isn't that awkward, just clumsy. Believe me, I am not complaining. xD --DJ Spenstar! 23:28, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Sprink...I wish I could have a larger group of friends, cause it would really help when I'm feeling down...but of course, aspbergers gets in the way again...DX.....OK, I should really get back on topic. Can you feel the rhythm in my heart, the beat's going düm tek tek! 23:31, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Spenny, I don't think people with Asperger's are always awkward. I'm trying to balance her out a little, but she does say awkward things later. Nonny... You'll have to see... Chimmy, you're welcome. You kind of are on topic, too. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:34, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Hmmm...not what I expected, but still fine. Who knew Creigh had a prosthetic leg?- The Anonymous User 23:43, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


I honestly didn't at first. It was probably about a week before I started the story when I thought of it, and thought there was no reason to not put it in. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:46, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


We're not always awkward. That's why I'm happy! Your portrayal of someone with Asperger's is doing us justice! =D --DJ Spenstar! 23:57, February 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. I want to do it justice. It's pretty nerveracking, honestly, so I'm glad to hear that people with it are so supportive. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:35, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


When you take a big risk, it's always nerve-racking. xD I still have one question about Audrey II, in regards to the name. I know this is trivial, but I'm really curious as to why you'd have Audrey II almost share a name with a similar, shallow counterpart? Just asking... xD --DJ Spenstar! 00:43, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


I dunno. Before Audrey, I planned to do an Asperger's character, but she didn't fit in TDR. I kind of thought it would be fun/funny/awkward to have her named after Audrey, who is also awkward. But mostly the name comes from the man eating plant in Little Shop of Horrors. I wanted the name to be awkward to kind of give her a label in the eyes of others, if that makes sense. She can't escape the fact that she has Asperger's and she kind of embraces it in a way. I hope you get what I'm trying to say. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:54, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


So, if Audrey I hadn't existed/been names something else, you still would have names yours Audrey II? In that case, it makes perfect sense now. xD --DJ Spenstar! 00:56, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


I don't think so. I think I was thinking about Audrey when I came up with the name and thought: XD I have no idea what she would have been named, as I don't normally name my characters when I think them up. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:58, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


Ah. *shrugs* I guess it still makes sense, and it's not like Audrey II isn't awesome in her own right. xD --DJ Spenstar! 01:01, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


Great second chapter. Beau is definatley my favorite, obviously. Also, Dante was surprisingly cool. I also liked Renee, Creigh, Sky Lynn and Logan more than I thought I would. I enjoyed the fact that Creigh has one leg, it lets him move away from being the Angelo-clone I was afraid he'd be. Sebastian's observation skills finally came in handy, though, I thought it was funny how in the first chapter most of his 'observations' were blatantly obvious statements. I sense a friendship between him and Logan, or at least, Logan will be able to confide his feelings in Sebastian. Hae Won's elimination was a little surprising, but I didn't care too much, she's kinda low on my list. TDIwriter 01:11, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


Well I have Aspurgers and I have alot of friends at my school even though I have Apurgers. At my school their is only 3 possibly 4 people that dont like me. - Copper5


That's cool, Copper. Thanks, TDIwriter. I'm glad you like those characters more, now. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:32, February 9, 2010 (UTC)


Nice chapter. I did not see that coming for Isaiah to leave. Nice chapter Sprink! Fanfiction2010Let's be UNISON BUDDIES!Cyan is the new purple. Yes it's true. 18:21, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Wow, just wow. Stacy and Logan? Who knew. But I love the couple idea. Anyway, that really surprised me. Isaiah? Wow. Didn't see that coming. Anyway Patsy has the best line in my opinion. "The teens are collectively thinking to themselves, 'Well that sucked'." I'm also sensing some growth in her character. Goldenshane 18:24, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, guys. I knew this chapter had a couple of surprises... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 18:39, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


I read that Frederick was picking his nose. I was like, "He's probably gonna leave." I read that him and Isaiah were the bottom two. I was like, "The final pineapple goes to Frederick. I just know it." I know the Sprink drama variety. It's slightly different from the Nalyd drama variety. XD --I'd rather dance than talk with you. 19:03, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


I sense major character development arising in many characters this chapter! As far as I can tell, I see development in Topher, Al, Frederick, Emmy, Logan and Stacy. This is good...I look forward to more as always.- The Anonymous User 20:20, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


XD Cokeman. Thanks, TAU. I try to develop as many characters as I can. I'm glad you're looking forward to more. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:39, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Okay, that was just wrong! Dante's really starting to piss me off! Aside from the obvious, great chapter. Sad about Isiah, but happy about the one lasting hookup, xD. --DJ Spenstar! 20:53, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


I loved the chapter!! I'm now rooting for Al because he talks funny like Herman. Was it because of TDCruise that you switched to pineapples? Turnertang 21:05, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Spenstar. And to think you actually liked him before. XD Thanks, Turnertang. Yes, that part was a reference to TDCruise. I knew a story used coconuts, but I honestly couldn't remember which one until I read the finale. I was hoping you would have complained so I could change it to pineapples, as I thought that scene was pretty funny in my head, at least. I decided to do it, anyway. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:12, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


That was before I saw him in action, LOL. I have to remember that jerks are, well, jerks. Especially when writing for them. Ugh, I hate writing for outright jerks... --DJ Spenstar! 21:14, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


I thought about complaining but I decided not to because I didn't care that much and it was a pretty funny scene. Turnertang 21:29, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter Sprink! I will miss Howeveryouspellhisname. Happy February!Come talk with me and I'll give you a cookie.Cyan rocks! 22:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Another great chapter. I don't know how you do it, Sprink. Every single chapter of every single one of stories is totally amazing. I already like the whole Logan and Stacy thing. You didn't waste time getting to those relationships. XD --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 22:21, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, guys. Yep, this time the relationships are earlier. XD Logan and Stacy... Love at first sight. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:40, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Aww, I'm gonna miss Isaiah. :( I never expected Logan and Stacy. I loved the chapter, even though the actual challenge went so quickly it was as if you squeezed it in at the last second. XD --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 23:20, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


I pretty much did. XD I realized how much I was writing about everything else, and I didn't have a specific challenge planned. I realized the challenge would have to be short. The chapter was still as long as some of the others, but the challenge was reminiscent of TD:BI where the challenges were very unrelated to the rest of the story. Thanks for liking it despite the challenge. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:28, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


LOL. I was actually like "YAY CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! Aww... challenge... YAY MORE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! Aww... Isaiah... YAY LOGAN x STACY!!!" XD --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 23:37, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


XD That's what I was going for... Maybe. You know I love my character development. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:45, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


We're all suckers for character development. xD --DJ Spenstar! 23:48, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


Im liking Sky Lyn more now. Dante is obviously the villian. I also think Violet will become a villian also. Soon shell be telling Janice evil things and appearing in the confessional all by herself. - Copper5


Copper... All I can say about what you said about Violet is... XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:34, February 16, 2010 (UTC)


Violet would be an awsome villian! She could be a very dark, disurbing, and creepy character. Shes a doll for crying out loud! XD - Copper5


NOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT ISAIAH He was my fav--Kenzen - The Potato Min! EPIC-MOO (COWS FTW)! 03:16, February 16, 2010 (UTC)


XD, Copper. And Sorry Kenzen. :( SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:30, February 16, 2010 (UTC)


I just read chapter three, and I have to say, I liked it, a lot. I was surprised it was Isaiah, as I thought Dante would use him as a pawn, but his end makes sense. I didn't forsee Logan and Stacy, but I'm glad Logan's going to get noticed. For some reason, I have this feeling that The Onslaught is going to lose a significant amount of the challenges, with only three or four of them making it to the merge, depending on if the merge is at the final ten, like Boney Island, or the final twelve, like Reality. TDIwriter 02:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)


TDIwriter: If your theory is correct, I will be happy, as most of my favorites are on the Failures.- The Anonymous User 02:53, February 18, 2010 (UTC)


I feel the same way. TDIwriter 02:54, February 18, 2010 (UTC)


I appreciate your comments as always, TDIwriter. I like speculation, too. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 04:05, February 18, 2010 (UTC)


As do I, but like my character, I am frequently wrong, as I can analyze and speculate all I want, but somehow I usually fail to account for some X-factor in the outcome.- The Anonymous User 04:07, February 18, 2010 (UTC)


The X-factor being my thought process. XD It's almost always hard to guess what direction a story will go with anyone's story, as (like currently with this story) there are eighteen possible ways it could end next time, really... Though I already know what will happen... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 04:14, February 18, 2010 (UTC)


Maaaaaaaaaaan, if Sebastian was on the 'Slaught, he'd get rid of Dante at the veeeeeeeeeeeeeeery first loss...I still like Al, of course, and Logan. Oh, and Cree. Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 15:49, February 19, 2010 (UTC)


Al all the way! Turnertang 20:10, February 19, 2010 (UTC)


TropicsEdit

I felt like the last section was a little long. We needed a new one. :) Fanfiction2010Let's be UNISON BUDDIES!Cyan is the new purple. Yes it's true. 14:12, February 20, 2010 (UTC)\\



What the heck? Stacy? Did NOT see that one coming. Sebastian was really wrong that time. Now, he's at the bottom of my list. Goldenshane 18:15, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


I get that a lot about people not seeing eliminations coming... XD I hope you liked the chapter, though. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:05, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


You have got to be the most random person when deciding eliminations, I did like the chapter, but I loved StacyxLogan. Goldenshane 19:18, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Hmmm....that was odd. I liked this chapter though, and while Sebastian messed up, I don't think he's nearly as bad as Dante.- The Anonymous User 19:36, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Was that thing with the Muldoons really staged? Nad331 is a terrible bowler with an average of 300... after 17 games. Terrible, right? 19:45, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Maybe, Nad. XD I don't mean to be random. Sometimes my characters are created with their placement in mind. Stacey was one of those. I really don't want people to not like Sebastian. His intentions were really good. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:18, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


He just made an alliance with Maugerite(did I spell that right?). Let's hope he doesn't become the next Zane... Nad331 is a terrible bowler with an average of 300... after 17 games. Terrible, right? 20:22, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter! My favorite part was when Al was like "Challenges are coooool" and Chris was like "Um. Whatever." That made me LOL. Turnertang 20:40, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Turnertang. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:55, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Sebastian equals Courtney now. Considering this is me saying that, this is a good thing. XD --I'd rather dance than talk with you. 21:04, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Cool Someone other than TAU likes Sebastian. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:05, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


OMG, if you guys don't know, Connie Muldoon is a character played by Lori Beth Dennberg. She was a character on All That, my favorite show. And, she was in the movie "Good Burger"! 21:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter Sprink! It was so awesome that my favorite part was none of it. It would be too hard to decide. XD Happy February!Come talk with me and I'll give you a cookie.Cyan rocks! 21:52, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


XD, Thanks Bocaj. You got it, Webly! XD I love Lori Beth Dennburg/Connie Muldoon. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:05, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


I have to admit, I got scared when Yancy was in the bottom two xD Can you feel the rhythm in my heart, the beat's going düm tek tek! 22:07, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


I'm glad you felt something. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:22, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Okay, Audrey II was hilarious, so was Yancy, I'm hating Dante more with each chapter, I feel bad for Topher and I feel his pain, I also feel bad for Beau,and for Logan, I don't know whether Sebastian was lying or not, but I've just lost my respect for either him or Stacy, or both. *gasps for air* xD --DJ Spenstar! 23:33, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Lol. Thanks for your opinions. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


The thing with the Muldoon family was really funny. Especially the Taylor part. "I named her before the name, y'know, got all popular, y'know." XD Al is still at the top of the list, and I'm actually wondering if Sebastian is right. Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 23:46, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


I also thought of your character Taylor when I did that scene. XD I'm glad you liked those parts. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:54, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


Wait, Was Sebastian lying? --DJ Spenstar! 23:56, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


I'm not sure if I should answer that. It should be clear from the chapter, though, so no... He wasn't lying, but neither was Stacy. Sebastian was mistaken, but not intentionally lying. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:58, February 22, 2010 (UTC)


I swear I will never completely understand your subtleties in writing, Sprink. Believe me, that's a good thing. Heck, there are odd things you point out in other people's writing that amaze me, and that the author never would have figured out. xDD --DJ Spenstar! 00:01, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


I take that as a compliment. I don't like flat out saying things, but I take it for granted that not everyone figures it out... I try to make up for the subtlty with trivia. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:04, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


It was meant as a compliment. Trivia is nice, maybe I others should try that. xD. --DJ Spenstar! 00:06, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


I know that Sunshine, TDIwriter and Chimmy do it, too. I like reading it, too. I think I might try Author's notes for this story when I'm done with it, as opposed to plain old trivia. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:09, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


Like you did for TDBI? Yeah, that was interesting to read. Especially the Alternate Version. --DJ Spenstar! 00:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah, like for TD:BI. I'm glad you like that. I have to work on that for TD:BI, again... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:13, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


I remember when you were still writing that. Good times. xD --DJ Spenstar! 00:16, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


SPRINK YOU ARE A DEAD MAN(jk)*kills him*STACY SHOULD HAVE GOTTEN SECOND *stabs repeatedly*(jk)*stops*If you bring people back my vote is for Stacy.... Oh wait your dead*brings him back to life*--Kenzen - Is The Potato On The Block 00:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)



XDDDDDD Fanfiction2010Let's be UNISON BUDDIES!Cyan is the new purple. Yes it's true. 01:56, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


That was another great chapter; IDK if I liked it more than the past ones, but still, it was great. Upset about Stacy, but I'll get over it. I loathe Sebastian now... he's a jerk. XP --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 12:22, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


Stacy, Stacy, Stacy, Stacy, Stacy RETURN. Oh and Sorry for killing you Sprink, Sebastien and Fredrick shall leave next i now it(I hope XD)----Kenzen Know That He Will Cya(n) 12:51, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Nonny. At least you didn't hate it or kill me. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 15:04, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


Sprink, you should put this on the sidebar now that it's current and major. --DJ Spenstar! 21:58, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


IDK. It's still kind of early, right? SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:00, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


I honestly don't care about earliness when it comes to this. The story's great, it's a huge hit from a well-known author, and I'm working on character rates for it right now. They are going to be more detailed than I thought they'd be, LOL. When would you sidebar this story? --DJ Spenstar! 22:05, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry for being conceited again. -_-' xD --DJ Spenstar! 22:36, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


IDK, I was thinking of adding Total Drama Life or Total Drama All-Stars. Thanks, though. I'm glad you like this that much. I think maybe a little later for this one, though. Conceited never crossed my mind. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:39, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


That sounds like pretty good timing. :) --DJ Spenstar! 23:01, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


Nooo! Not Stacy! She was like Kendra, but with shorter sleeves! (XD) Awesome chapter, though. Every chapter makes me want to hurt the antagonist guy whose name suddenly escapes me more and more. HE'S A MEANIE-PANTS!!! XD --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 22:25, February 24, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Sunny. XD, in general. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:09, February 24, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah, the minor Taylor page fiasco....at least the deal went through, and was a friendly one. *glares at Devon Spenstar Joseph* XD Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 23:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)


What did I do? xD --HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 23:31, February 26, 2010 (UTC)


I didn't see that coming. I mean, even at the bottom two, when I knew Frederick was gone, I was still hoping Dante would leave. 'Cause now I've still got zero points in the fantasy league. Boring sig. 19:49, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


So, four down, 16 to go...I am OK with this elimination, but Dante is really bugging me now, and so is Topher.- The Anonymous User 20:02, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


I hope you guys enjoyed the chapter. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:30, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Ok Good Chap--Kenzen Know That He Will Cya(n) 20:50, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Another great chapter. I would go into specifics like I usually do, but I'm too tired to do that, now. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 21:00, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, guys. It's okay Nonny. I expect a full 1,000 word essay about what you liked about it later. XD JK SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:03, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter. I'm glad The Onslaught lost, even though Frederick, who was one of my favorites, was eliminated. I think the only people on The Onslaught left that I really like are Creigh and Sky Lynn. The Epic Failures are rockin' again. I like the friendship between Yancy and Beau, since Beau is my favorite and Yancy is one of my favorites. I've noticed two things, one, the people Dante thinks would be good for an alliance usually the next to go, (Isaiah, Frederick), and two, my favorite character usually ends up having something unfortunate happen to them, and then they're eliminated, (Zane's betrayals, Micky D.'s photoshoot/target by Priscilla), which makes me wonder what will happen to Beau. Creigh's "Dear Topher, here's how I lost my leg" story was neat, mostly because of the mentioning of a scorpion, my favorite animal. If The Onslaught lose again next week, I say either Sky Lynn or Patsy will go, as they seem like the least important members of the team. If The Epic F's lose, I'd say it would be Janice or Willow, for the same reason, possibly Beau or Yancy, too. TDIwriter 21:26, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


...Best elimination moment ever. Even though Frederick was eliminated, still... --Elimination! Redemption! COKEMAN11! 21:26, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Dispite wht everyone thinks, I think Patsy will go far. Sprink has not really used her yet. I think she still need something. Maybe something to get her to stop talking in the third person, even though it's fricken hilarious when she does. Patsy once again had the best line in this chapter again. Goldenshane 21:29, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for your comments, Shane. Thanks, Cokeman. I wanted him to go further, but I couldn't make it work. :( TDIwriter, thanks for the detailed review. XD at the "Dear Topher, here's how I lost my leg". That's how it feels writing those background things, sometimes, though I enjoyed this one. The scorpion was based on his fear on his profile page. I thought it up later, thinking "why would he be afraid of scorpions?" SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:34, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter! The whole thing was sweetness. I love the love square between Dante, Topher, Isiash, and Emmy. I just said love square... Happy February!Come talk with me and I'll give you a cookie.Cyan rocks! 22:18, March 1, 2010 (UTC)


Grat chapter! I'm going to miss Fredrick and his nose picking awesomeness. Turnertang 00:08, March 2, 2010 (UTC)


Meh, It's okay that Frederick is a poor loser (XD). Besides...I was too lazy to make a different character for you to use, so I was like "Use this guy" and you were like "kk" and I was like "What I intended was to have a rich, friendly shy guy" and then you were like "Snob rich guy" and I was like "omg pwn" and you were like "bottom two" and I was like "yay" and you were like "eliminate" and I was like "omg epic" and you were like "srry" and I was like "itz k" and then we repeat this cycle. XD --Elimination! Redemption! COKEMAN11! 00:13, March 2, 2010 (UTC)


XD Cokeman. I think you wrapped it up quite nicely. Thanks, Turnertang. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:35, March 2, 2010 (UTC)


Frederick now falls below Willow for saving Dante... xD, great chappy man! --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 02:10, March 2, 2010 (UTC)


But he did give Dante a wedgie in front of everyone. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:36, March 3, 2010 (UTC)


My faves out of everyone left are


Audrey II Janice/Violet Creigh Sebastian Yancy Willow


- Copper5


Hm, okay. Thanks for your thoughts. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 18:07, March 6, 2010 (UTC)


I saw that coming JK that was shocking. Well See yall later Puppet GalKenzen Eleven! 18:15, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


The word "Logan" was not said at all in this chapter. Hmm. Boring sig. 19:43, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


( I liked Janice... Oh well. As the last comment said, Logan seemed to be shunned in this chapter. Poor Logan... great chapter though. Happy March!Come talk with me and I'll give you good luck.Cyan FTW! 19:51, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Kinda sad, isn't it? XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:18, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Agreed, Poor, Logan but what's done is done Hello name's Dark I'm very blue Cause blue is that awesome


*Makes New Section just for the heck of it*Edit

Well Have to admit Janice didn't really seem like a winner XDKenzen Eleven! 20:36, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Sebastian is overthinking this game, but I like him paired with Marguerite. I don't think Al lost his temper, and I think you granted my wish regarding Topher. I'm liking Topher a lot more now, he has the whole "I'm only human" thing that I liked about Niles, and I can relate to him regarding Emmy. Dante is still a jerk. I LOVED Janice and Violet in this chapter BTW. Oh yeah, and Audrey II was wonderful here. I like how she is trying really hard to understand metaphors and what they mean. She's showing great progress. Overall, wonderful chappy! =D --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 20:59, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Good chapter, although I liked Janice. Marguerite is cool too, though, but, whatever. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 21:05, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, guys. Al was supposed to be not lost temper-y. XD I'm glad you like Topher. And I'm glad people liked Janice/Violet. I'm also glad Spenstar didn't think Violet was possessed, or something. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:15, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


That thought never crossed my mind, because you wouldn't use Occult stuff in your writing, and you wouldn't blatantly lie about a character of yours. I figured Janice placed Violet there, or someone else did, or a third factor. *someone accidentally kicking the puppet, for example* --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 21:18, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Violet punting. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:26, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


XD...poor Audrey II...she's seeming more and more like me every day, though. It's almost creepy. O_O Show me how to lie, you're getting better all the time... 21:45, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


She had some funny moments this time, I think. I try to do her justice, so I'm glad you can relate. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:48, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Good chapter. I'm glad Janice is gone. Maybe now Violet will stop showing up in my nightmares.TDIwriter 21:52, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Aw, poor Janice. Oh, Renee didn't get called at the elimination ceremony. Fanfiction2010Let's be UNISON BUDDIES!Cyan is the new purple. Yes it's true. 21:54, March 8, 2010 (UTC)



Wait, did you mention the word bromance?!?!?!?!? GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! I hate that word!!!!! Mostly because to me, it's not true in my case. I have a seriously hard time making friends with people of my own gender. Don't ask why. Tdirm- Semi-Legendary Mockery! NIRVANA EVERYWHERE! 21:59, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


I only have one bro best friend. I would never use the world in real life. XD Thanks, TDIwriter and Fanny. I added Renee. Thanks for the heads up. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:03, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Nice chapter Sprink. I liked it a lot. Goldenshane 22:07, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


I don't remember Logan in this chapter, like, whatsoever. It's almost like he just disappeared...Unless I'm forgetting something he did before. TDIwriter 22:07, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Shane. :) TDIwriter, that was on purpose. It was meant to signify that he lost his notability after the Stacy thing, and the writer forgot him. You gave me the idea when you said you sometimes forget about him when you did your rankings. I was going to write "Sometimes I forget him", then thought... I never didn't mention a character before (I don't think) while they were still competing... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:12, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


I don't think you have...I know there I times when not all of your characters have dialogue, not you've always mentioned the ones that are still competeing. I remember, once I was writing an early chapter of RTDI, and I completely forgot Edward. I didn't mention him at all in the chapter, and only realized he was missing when the amount of marshmallows at the ceremony didn't add up correctly. So I like, squeezed him into the ceremony really quick....I'm not sure if I went back and added him to other parts of the chapter....I have a feeling that Logan will slide through the game like this, that or maybe Sebastian will use his powers of observations to observe his absense, and he'll be eliminated for not contributing to the team...unless they don't find him until after the merge, or something. TDIwriter 22:18, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Logan is there, he just wasn't notable this chapter, so lacked anything worth mentioning in a way, combined with the other characters starting to forget him. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:26, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Me sad, and not just because me winner pick is gone. I liked Janice..and Sky Lynn is really getting on my nerves right now. She's so too frickin unrealistic. And damn you, C-Bass. D:< Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 22:28, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Oh yeah, two other things I wanted to mention. 1) Al sounds like Trent Lane in my head, and 2) I just realized that my Yancy refered to winning by default as the sweetest kind of win, and yours called it the most losery way to win, I thought that was amusing, once I remembered it. TDIwriter 22:31, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


This chapter was funny, and the elimination was OK, but where was Logan?- The Anonymous User 22:40, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Good chapter! I thought Al was going to go for a minute. Turnertang 22:58, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for liking the chapter, people. I get the Trent Lane thing. The Yancy thing was coincidence, though I kind of remember that. Logan was there but not worth mentioning. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:10, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


I figured it was coincidence, but I felt like mentioning it, anyway. TDIwriter 23:14, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


That part with Beau and Audrey talking made me lol. And I think it would have been funnier had Violet been an actual competitor while still being a puppet, and Janice eliminated first. And something tells me that since everyone thinks Logan will win, he won't. Boring sig. 20:14, March 10, 2010 (UTC)


I thought of Violet being voted off individually but I didn't like that idea. The other way around would have been funny. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:28, March 10, 2010 (UTC)


Maybe Janice being elimanated and Violet staying XD--Kenzen Eleven! 11:12, March 11, 2010 (UTC)


How did Logan get out? I really don't understand, Sebastian is now a total *cuse word* head! Hello name's Dark I'm very blue Cause blue is that awesome


Alright, C-Bass is really getting on my nerves. Arrogent much? Also, although I like Beau, I hope he goes. It seems that for Margurite, Renee, and Willow, gushing over Beau is the only thing that they'll do. However, I liked this chapter and C-Bass being brought down by his pride. Pride goes before a fall, now we just need a bigger fall..............Don't get me wrong, I liked this chapter, and now I like Yancy and Beau because of this chapter. Goldenshane 17:02, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


It is official Sebastien is terrible and at the bottom of my list Grrr XD. Logan We shall Ignore you :|. Wait who the heck is Logan. Beau Was cool XD. I felt The Beau standing on the beach naked was really funny . I hope Stacy and Logan get back together :) StacyXLogan Forevar =D----Kenzen Eleven! 17:13, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Who's Logan? I'm wondering how he is out! Hello name's Dark I'm very blue Cause blue is that awesome


What! The! Hell! There's a chance Logan could come back at the merge, RIGHT? Anyway, Al is getting on my last nerve with his stupid voice. I want him gone. Boring sig. 18:50, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I think a scene from this chapter makes a good one for Willow (The Willow and Yancy scene, where Willow blows her nose in Yancy's sweater...I found that amusing.)- The Anonymous User 19:06, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter! i loved the ending with Logan, I actually forgot he was a contestant until now. Turnertang 19:27, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I loved this chapter. I think that Topher will win Emmy eventually, because Dante's so overbearing. =P! Loved Yancy and Beau's friendship here, too bad Logan left. T_T After this chapter, I'd say Sebastian moves down a spot in my book. Audrey II is my new fave. I guess I should update that blog of mine eventually... xD


Oh yeah, and I loved this line:


"Sebastian says, 'That's not going to happen. We need something that will get someone's attention.' Willow raises an eyebrow. Sebastian adds, "That doesn't break any laws.'" xD! --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 19:55, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Awesome chapter as usual, Sprink! Dante is really getting on my nerves, especially with the way he treats Emmy. If I were Emmy, I probably would have smacked him across the face, kicked him in the gut, dumped him, and voted him out by now (hence why I'm not Emmy XD). LOL at poor Logan's elimination. There's been days where I've felt like him... I kind of hope Yancy and Renee end up together. XD --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:06, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for the comments, everyone. :) I really appreciate it. Spenny, there' a part of that scene that I think is one of the funniest... But no one commented on it, yet. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:11, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Well, Sprink, looking back on that general section, I found that it said everyone but "Beau, Logan, Sebastian, and Yancy" raised their hands in favor of having Beau stand naked on the beach for their SOS signal. So... Al raised his hand? XD --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:20, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah, you got it. XD I originally didn't list Logan because I forgot about him. >_> SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:23, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Oh the irony. XD Al worries me sometimes... --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:24, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


He's a little out there. XD Though, I didn't do that for any reason other than for humor. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:31, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Al is one crazy dude. xD! --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 20:33, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Another great chapter. It keeps getting better, IMO. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 20:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I can imagine Al just raising his hand because the others were, not knowing what the hand-raising concerned. XD I agree, Nonny, every chapter gets better and better. --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:41, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


That's nice of you guys to say. :) As for Al... That's how I kind of thought of it, like he was just raising his hand for no reason. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:47, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I think Sprink did that so I'd hate Al............Just kidding. Great chappy though I was excited to see Beau go home. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:50, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Aww, poor Logan. Great chapter though. Umm... I wonder why Al raised his hand... Happy March!Come talk with me and I'll give you good luck.Cyan FTW! 20:52, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Not for any reason. XD He may not have been even listening... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:54, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I think Logan had the saddest storyline, out of any of your characters. TDIwriter 21:04, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry... He probably did, at least how it ended up. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:10, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I still think the saddest storyline award goes to Cary, but that's just me.- The Anonymous User 21:13, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


He's a contender, too. BTW, I said sorry if it actally made anyone sad, as I don't like being that harsh to my characters. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:16, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


Cary was redeemed, as of now, Logan still has no happiness. TDIwriter 21:22, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I still say you're just trying to get me to cry. XD (You almost got me a bunch of times last season, let's see if I end up bawling this time around!) --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 21:23, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I have some really emotional moments planned... I'll get you to cry, yet, Sunny. I thought I'd have ya with some of those TDR moments. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:12, March 15, 2010 (UTC)


I loved this chapter, and to clear things up, I posted my guess on the fantasy league, BEFORE the chapter was posted. Like an hour before the chapter was posted. I promise. Goldenshane 16:47, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. I double checked to be sure, and you're right. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:40, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


You're welcome. I know, it looks shady, I guessed correctly, and it was in the same day, but it was before the chapter was posted. XD Anyway, time to tell about why I loved the chapter. It made me realize that C-Bass is human, although he snapped at Yancy. Bad analyist. XD But I loved the fact that the girls weren't all, Beau, Beau, where art thou Beau? It also seemed like Willow's about to be wreaked. In other words, is about to have some development. I can't wait to see it. Also........Patsy and Sky Lynn were funny as always. Goldenshane 17:57, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter, as usually. I think I'll miss Marguerite, but her second nature flirtiness bothered me. Track marks? Topher was paying Mr. Brownstone a little visit, I presume. I love how Dante jumped up and down on the sandcastle. I think I'm starting to relate to Yancy more than Beau, now that I'm not handsome anymore...Beau is still my favorite, though. Topher falling in with a bad crowd at thirteen is similar to what happened to me, except I was a little older. TDIwriter 18:03, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for your comments. *looked up what Mr. Brownstone is* SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:03, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Heroin. TDIwriter 19:04, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


A heroin dealer is what I found. 'Brown' possibly being in the dealer's name for being named after the color of the drug. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:17, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Did Not See That Coming--Kenzen Eleven! 19:27, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


This chappy made me T_T. Sebastian's heartbroken, he's not with Marguerite, and the Onslaught won again. One thing I did like is Topher and Creigh's friendship here. Topher seems to have come a long way, and his horrible past (which is reminiscent of my own dark characters) makes him all the more likable, just like Niles was. Audrey II and Topher are my new favorites... --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 19:53, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Spenny and Kenny. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:59, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Another good chapter. I really liked it. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 20:12, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Nonny. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:13, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter :). I was wondering why Topher wore such concealing clothing, so now I can see why. This chapter made me hate Sebastian a little less, since for once he seemed to be actually human after his heart got broken by Marguerite. And yes, before this chapter I despised Sebastian because he single-handedly sent home three nice people (Stacy, Janice, and Logan) when none of them even deserved to go. Hearing Sebastian snap at Beau stung a little because an old friend of mine said something similar to me about a year ago. Right now, Willow and Sky Lynn just seem like side-girls who provide idle conversation, so I'm looking forward to seeing their characters developed. Three fails in a row equals an epic fail! Way to live up to your team name. I'm loving Al, Beau, and Yancy, and Audrey II is growing on me. Loved it, keep it up! Lalainee 20:45, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


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I liked it. Marguerite didn't seem like a winner. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:46, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Lalainee and Fanny. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:52, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter. One thing that scared me is that Willow didn't cry at all... How's that possible? Marguerite was sweet, but I really wasn't a fan of hers. Happy March!Come talk with me and I'll give you good luck.Cyan FTW! 21:03, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. I think she cried twice. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:10, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Hmm. *Analizes crying meter, or something* I guess I was wrong... But that's okay... I just forgot... As always... But people forgot... But I forgot the most which makes me stupid. See my constant battle against bad self-esteem?


That's nothing to cry about. XD I overlook/forget a lot. No big deal. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:30, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


When Topher was talking about his gang, he said "know good" instead of "no good". Just wanted to point that out. --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 21:34, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah... I meant to write that. They were always up to know good. Like they wanted to know what good was. XD JK Thanks for the correction. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:39, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Good chapter, I liked the secret agent ninjas guys in camoflauge. Turnertang 01:07, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. I liked that part, too. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:15, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Ipols at the al yancy beau and Sebastian scene! I could totally imagine al being frozen and Sebastian whipping off his glasses! Good job!^^--The Master of Red is HERE! Don't worry! xD 03:15, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. :) *wonders what lpols means* LOLs? SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:25, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah I hit a wrong key xD--The Master of Red is HERE! Don't worry! xD 03:27, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


I just had a thought...Marguerite's gone...there are two girls left on the Failures...I get the feeling one will end up with Yancy, and another with either Sebastian or Beau (I like the idea of Sebastian X Willow myself, but that's just me), but I get the feeling that's where the Failure romance storyline will go. Also, the Onslaught are overdue for a loss now.- The Anonymous User 02:34, March 24, 2010 (UTC)


"HE'S IMPROVISING!!!!!! NOOOOOO!" "Uh uh! No help from random bears." "Why the heck are you wearing camoflauge clothes?" "Then I got..uh...nothing!" "*eyeroll* Your appendix is on the other side, Topher." LOL I normally don't like matchmaker scenes, but the combination of Al, Beau and Yancy was just too hysterical. I only have two suggestions--1. I'm not a big fan of the dark and thematic elements of your stories. I prefer the Total Drama: Boney Island comedy and such, so maybe you could improve that in say, Total Drama Time Travel? And 2. Bring back the...whatever their names are. Connie, I think...and Taylor, "before the name got all popular, y'know." That's all I remember. XD Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 03:06, March 24, 2010 (UTC)


This story is thematic with comedy, while I want TDTT to be comedic with thematic elements. I wanted to challenge myself to do a more comedic story, but I like the dramatic parts I thought up for TDTT. I'm glad you seemed to like parts of this chapter. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:48, March 24, 2010 (UTC)


Once again, C-Bass was wrong. When will he realize he is never right? Anyway, I liked this chapter. It was awesomer than normal. Also, without Beau, what will Willow do? All she does is gush over Beau, this'll be interesting to read. Goldenshane 17:16, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


You forgot that she cries, too. XD Thanks. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:31, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Oh Al. What's da matter with you. "My best friend is gay." Sebastian says. "I am?" Al asks. xD. Good chappy. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:06, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter. Though, Sebastian is now my least favorite character in the story. I'll miss me--I, mean, I'll miss Beau. TDIwriter 20:07, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, TDIWriter and Fanny. I think I'll miss Beau, too, as he is fun to write for. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:02, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


This chapter was awesome. Poor Yancy... It sucks to be mistaken as gay, when your not, but anyway. I think that this story just keeps getting better and better. Happy March!Come talk with me and I'll give you good luck.Cyan FTW! 21:10, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Great chappy. Sebastian is gradually falling down the ranks here for me. Glad Beau's gone, not because of any animosity, but because it's what's best for him. I feel bad for Yancy, and I also feel bad for Yancy and for Beau for being thought of as gay. You really like


the whole "gay subplot" thing, don't you? xD --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 21:12, March 29, 2010 (UTC)




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I guess so, as it can be used in different ways, and I try to come up with different ways for eliminations to happen, as opposed to the same thing. I didn't plan on having a gay subplot in this story, but I thought it was a good idea for a misunderstanding. And Beau and Yancy are my straightest characters ever, so the reader doesn't have doubts. So... yeah. XD Straight subplots appear more, though. :P Thanks for the comments. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:22, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Oh Beau, you will be missed. Sebastian has officially hit rock bottom for me. I'm convinced that he is a self-proclaimed analyst, considering that none of his assumptions have been correct. I almost wanted Yancy to leave, but now that I think about it, Beau's absence will allow Willow and Renee to spend less time gushing over him and more time developing as characters. Al was as funny as ever, Sky Lynn was mostly absent as usual, and I'm beginning to fear for Emmy's safety. Overall, great chapter. :) -Lalainee 21:25, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


I thought Zane was your straightest, lol TDIwriter 21:27, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Well, true... XD But Beau and Yancy's backgrounds revolve around girls. That's what I mean. Thanks, Lalainee. I appreciate your comments. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:35, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Al was awesome in the chapter! That was on of my favorite chapter so far! Turnertang 23:47, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


This whole "gay subplot" stuff in your stories makes me wonder if any of your characters is a homophobe... --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 23:54, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


High praise, indeed. :) Thanks, Turnertang. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:55, March 29, 2010 (UTC) IDK what you mean, Spenny. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:57, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


By "is" I mean "will be" or "is planned to be". If you're unaware what a homophobe is, a homophobe is someone who is scared of/uncomfortable around gays, or dislikes gays and homosexuality, or something like that. --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 00:18, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Spenstar, Zane was a homophobe, I think he knows what it means. TDIwriter 00:20, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


I used the word in TD:BI, I think. Zane was one, Cary was one (extremely), and Dante is minorly one. I wondered what you meant by the fact that it sounded like you thought I never wrote one. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:28, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Buea, gone sad. I loved it. The Ending scene exchange between Buea and Yancy was funny XD--Kenzen Eleven! 00:43, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Oh, nevermind, xD. Someday I'll re-read through TDBI and TDR and see how many things I can pick up that I didn't before. xD --☆ HERE'S SPENNY!! Oh wait, I gotta go! Cya(n)! 00:46, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


That's it, I've had it. Sebastian is really pissing me off. Or he's just an idiot. Did he know he was wrong? And what was with the animal-cat-thing? Boring sig. 01:06, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Could you consider me a homophobe? LOL Dante doesn't pass of as a homophobe to me. He's a prostesiphobe. LOL Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 01:16, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


The animal-cat-thing was a tribut to Sakaki, and a lack of ideas for The Onslaught in this chapter. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:20, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Sakaki? Boring sig. 01:23, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Look at Renee's trivia to see what I mean. P.S. I'm really not trying to make Sebastian so hated. T_T SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:41, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Okay, I got caught up on the last two chapters, and they were both super good. I'm actually starting to like Al now. Maybe I've just gotten used to his annoying voice... --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 16:15, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Despite Topher leaving, Awesome chappy Dante deserved it =D--Kenzen Eleven! 16:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


I love that Willow is eliminated (from the challenge) when she cries. Hmm, most of the people I was thinking would make it far are pretty much all gone, by now. The story absolutely has a different feel to it, now. One reason is probably because my favorite character is gone, as it was the same way with TDI after Search and Do Not Destroy. And the obvious reason, is that the most recent chapter was pretty intense. Though, it was understandable from every viewpoint that I can imagine. Dante reacted in the same way every abusive significant other has, that I've seen personally. Emmy reacted perfectly, as the conflicted lover of an abuser. Topher, though, stole the show. He was able to put into action, every angry thought, every urge, and every compulsion to punish the wicked, that I've wanted to, but could never find the courage to do. However, as a person, I do feel that Topher went overboard, and Dante may have gotten more than he had coming. I really see them as three dimensional people, as opposed to characters, after this chapter. I think Creigh may be some kind of hero. He managed to approach his friend, in spite of the fact that he probably knew Topher's mind was bordering on irrational thought, at the moment, and at least tried to stop what was going on. TDIwriter 16:33, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Oh...........Wow............That was new. I never expected that. Although Dante had it coming. I saw Patsy make some progress in this chapter, and some CreighxSky Lynn. Anyway, I think that this was your best chapter, the reason, read TDIwriter's above comment. Goldenshane 16:37, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Thank you for your nice comments, everyone. I always want my characters to be more than just one dimensional. This was a major chapter for this story, so I'm glad you guys are responding favorably to it. I hope everyone understands that it wasn't violent just for the fun of it, and that I tried to not make it overly violent/descriptive, but I still think this scene and the subject matter are slightly more than what TDI would touch on, so that's the major reason for the PG-13 rating. I'm not promoting violence by any means in any situation, so that's the major reason it was shown that Topher will have to face consequences other than just being expelled from the contest. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:58, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Awsome chapter! Dante had it coming though, Who would have thought Topher would get arrested! XD. I hope Audrey II starts to do more. maybe fall in love with Al? - Copper5


Oh my. That was...unexpected? Are you going to bring back any characters? How come, if Emmy told them she wanted to be voted off, they didn't vote her off? *looks at the chapter where Frederick was eliminated* 167.206.52.67 18:46, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Wow! This chapter has got to be the best one yet!! Topher and Dante finally had the fight I imagined them having! I believe I have a theme for Topher now...it's actually a dual theme, but both from the same source. "No Good Deed" and "March of the Witch Hunters", both from the musical Wicked.- The Anonymous User 19:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


I FORGIVE YOU, TOPH-TOPH!!!! ;( Show me how to lie, you're getting better all the time... 19:23, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


I never could have, in a thousand years, seen this coming from you, Sprink. Topher doesn't get his happy ending, and... was eliminated like this. The most shameful and depressing way to lose. He came so far... but lost here. And I thought you hated violent scenes... It should have been Dante! Or them both! I regret nothing when I say that Dante had it coming all along! In short, this was a shocker, Sprink. Almost TDInfinity dark at the ends. T_T T_T T_T --DJ Spenstar! 19:48, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


On a side note, I agree 100% with TAU about Topher's theme songs, though I prefer "No Good Deed" for Topher, and overall. I was waiting to see a Wicked song used... --DJ Spenstar! 19:51, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


awesome chappy sprink! Poor creigh though, I hope he's alright. Other than creigh getting hurt, good chap. Reddyloves to talk and blog.Oh yes he did!!! 20:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Wow... This chapter was great... But the ending shocked me, totally. Poor Creigh, and Dante. My opinion of Topher has changed completely, but, I guess I can forgive him for his cold, dark behavior. Happy April!Come talk with me and I'll give your town rain.Cya (N) 20:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


I just finally caught up with the chapters, and the last three have had some awesome stuff. From "Beauyancy" (XD) to Sebastian and Marguerite to this climactic chapter with the Topher-Dante fight that no one saw coming, this is definately an awesome story. Congrats, Sprink. --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Wow. That was a heavy chapter. I now see why the story got its PG-13 rating. Topher was totally horrifying when he was talking about his plan, he sounded like a total sadist like Sky Lynn said. When Topher first hit Dante I was like,"Yay, he's gonna hit him once and that'll be that!" But then he continued to beat him and I quickly switched my opinion of the situation. When Topher first hit Creigh and he hit his head on the stump, I thought he, Topher, and Dante would be taken out of the game. Creigh because of injury, Topher for violence, and Dante because he was voted out. While I'm glad a triple elimination didn't occur, I do find it strange that Dante is still in the game. After all, he was voted out. Emmy's situation really saddens me because she reminds me of my aunt and her ex-boyfriend... on the plus side, I thought it was hilarious when Willow was eliminated from the challenge for crying. Great job! -Lalainee 21:04, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Wow. That was a very interesting chapter but the end kind of scared me though. Turnertang 21:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Best chapter ever! ...Sorry, I like moments like those... --Elimination! Redemption! COKEMAN11! 22:11, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Wow. Thanks for all the nice comments, guys. :) As for why only Topher went, think of it as how Grace was saved because Waterlily got sick. It has to do with meeting the required episodes, or something, I guess. Plus, Dante wasn't technically eliminated. As for why everyone didn't vote for Emmy, Dante is basically a big sore spot for members from both teams. They basically wanted to get rid of him since they could, I suppose. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:32, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


"Oh, man!" "Uh...Patsy said?" "Willow is out because she cried." Okay, Sprink...this chapter was pretty scary. At the end, when Dante was eliminated, I was happy when Topher kicked him, and was like, "Yay! Give him what he deserves!" But then he beat up Craig and got way too violent, and by then I was screaming in my head and was like, "Topher! STOP! STOP!" I actually felt bad for Dante, in a way. Oh, and Emmy is a complete idiot. Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 16:22, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry about that. There won't be other scary chapters like this. Emmy really isn't an idiot. I'm sure many people don't understand what she's going through, or where she's coming from. I don't think you should judge her (or in turn, people in similar situations), as you haven't gone through what she has. Perfectly intelligent people have been in abusive relationships for years, that don't look at it from the outside. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:35, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


People in abusive relationships sometimes don't think rationally. They are often convinced that it's their fault, or that the person will change, because they love them. It has nothing to do with intelligence, it's a deeper, psychological problem. TDIwriter 17:44, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, TDIwriter. You explained what I wanted to perfectly. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 18:47, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


Why did you make the merge contestants one color? I liked the random colors thing, it makes sense.- The Anonymous User 00:45, April 8, 2010 (UTC)


Somebody said they didn't l;ike it (I'm easily swayed). I thought the colors this time were pretty... I dunno. I didn't love them together. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:09, April 8, 2010 (UTC)


Meh, I think that may have been a color scheme choice, but whatever.- The Anonymous User 02:03, April 8, 2010 (UTC)


I like the re-installment of the random colors! They look better now.- The Anonymous User 02:05, April 8, 2010 (UTC)


I tried to make them look a little better. I don't plan colors for this stage, and didn't think ahead as to how they would look together. But it feels weird to change the set up randomly after two other stories. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)


I liked the new chapter, but I do have a new question, what did Patsy do? I didn't see anything she did wrong........ Goldenshane 16:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. It will definitely be explained later... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Wow. Just...wow. I honestly thought Yancy was gone. How long does Dante have to live? Boring sig. 18:40, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


I'll take those as good wows? That quetion will be left unaswered, though. At least on this talk page for now. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 18:46, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Oh. my. god. Sprink, I'm starting to think you want to make these guys miserable, as the only one who's even remotely well off is Yancy, who's learning things about himself, like the fact that he might be better off single. And Twoey, who's getting too minor to be bad off now. But the others... Creigh got injured, Topher cracked, Dante's DYING, Pasty got eliminated for a reason I don't understand, Sebastian got heartbroken and is a horrible analyst, Willow and Renee are traumatized by what happened, and Emmy's also miserable at this point. Al's being weird. I have to say that for the very first time, I didn't enjoy this chapter at all. I mean, Dante's a jerk, but he's actually DYING! (this isn't even a madhouse game like Infinity or TD:SC)


One of the things I did enjoy was the use of the word "chappy". And Topher's conversation with Chris. That's about it. Sorry... T_T --DJ Spenstar! 19:53, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


That's okay. *cries a litte bit* Everything makes sense, later. I hope you stick with it. Nobody's gonna be happy immediately after the last chapter, though. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:58, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Sprink, I hope you understand that I will not drop this story under any circumstances. (except for me leaving the wiki) --DJ Spenstar! 20:01, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Now you're leaving the wiki? T_T JK It's okay if you didn't like it. It just makes me question what I'm doing with the story, when I get comments like that. I feel like it would be weird to ignore the characters reaction after seeing something like that... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:13, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah... but let's face it, I couldn't last a month without the wiki. xD! --DJ Spenstar! 20:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


A very powerful chapter, Sprink. Once again, you managed to take me by surprise and make me feel for the "unlikable beyond repair" character. *pauses to shed a tear for Dante* I never mind that you kinda stick a two-second challenge in there and have the rest be character development, as CD makes me happy. XD I really hope Creigh wins at this point, as I have a feeling he'd use the prize money to help out Dante, and as sorry as I feel for Dante now, he doesn't deserve the win... XP Can't wait for more! --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:38, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, Sunshine. :) I know I have two second challenges sometimes. I usually like longer ones, but it's hard for me to think up challenges. TDR lent itself for the challenges to be a major part of the story. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:46, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


I don't blame you. Thinking up and writing challenges is one of the major reasons I've ditched my competition fics in favor of my Jak and Daxter fanfic... (I thought it'd be so fun to write a talent show challenge for TSI, but noooo!!! XD) --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:50, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Wow, this chapter had a lot of development, and the shortest challenge I've ever read. The whole thing was good, and dramatic. Now my TDT ratings are outdated, because Dante is up at the top again. About Patsy, well, she wasn't really much of a favorite, but I did like her, a bit, so her elimination I'm not too sad about. Overall, one of best chapters you've ever written, in all of your main four stories. Happy April!Come talk with me and I'll give your town rain.Cya (N) 21:02, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


That explains it. Though I miss your stories. T_T SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:04, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks Bocaj. :) I really appreciate that, as I did have some developmenthere, especially Yancy. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:06, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


  • is picking up the pieces of his brain off the floor, but can still talk cordially because this nothing more but typed words* Oh hey, my brain kind of exploded when Dante bawled, because it just wasn't very expected of him whatsoever. I mean, I can see him being all stoic and/or sulky about it, but I don't think he'd bawl his eyes out. But otherwise, not much else I can comment on... but what exactly did Patsy do? With the lights out, it's less dangerous. Here we are now, entertain us 21:10, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


While hard to follow, at parts, the chapter was very good. I really liked Chef, at the beginning, and there were some other good parts. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 21:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


What parts were hard to follow, Nonny? I'd like to fix them if I can. But thanks. Tdirm... the thing about Patsy is explained later. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:18, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


While I absolutely loathe Audrey II's use of the 'word' 'chappy', I liked this chapter. And that challenge, boy, I was afraid someone wouldn't walk away from such an intense challenge like that. Thank goodness no one else got hurt. I'm glad Sky Lynn is finally trying to really hammer it in to Emmy that Dante is a bad egg. I'm also curious as to what Patsy did, but I assume the next chapter will answer that. I'm guessing it's similar to what happened with Isaiah. I think either Yancy or Creigh will serve as my favorite character, (only in Beau's absense, though). TDIwriter 22:13, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, TDIwriter. Sorry about the chappy usage. It was a Spenny shout out. Anyway, the challenge was going to be more intense (like they had to tackle each other in order to get keys), but I didn't want to write much more. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:27, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


It's cool. I'm not really sure why, but the word 'chappy' sends me into an irrational blind fury (Okay, not really). The challenge was intense enough, with the tackling, lol.TDIwriter 22:35, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


It was semi-based on an old online friend of mine that had to draw a key for a promotional event to win a car, and he won as being the second person to draw a key. A bit anticlimactic... SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:49, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


Yeah, but it would be pretty awesome to win invincibility (or a car) that quickly. TDIwriter 22:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


It seems like Yancy is being voted for left and right here. XD This chapter made Dante immediatly go up in my character ratings, proving to me that he has a heart somewhere inside. (And that he doesn't have to grow one like Courtney :P) Show me how to lie, you're getting better all the time... 18:37, April 13, 2010 (UTC)


All I can say about that chapter is wow... Turnertang 19:20, April 13, 2010 (UTC)


Hopes that's a good wow. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:22, April 13, 2010 (UTC)


I like this story. Go Creigh! I hope...XDReddy ☆Legendary Stuffz STEVES EVERYWHERE! 23:21, April 13, 2010 (UTC)


I think Audery II will have meltdown or a confrontation with Sebastion this next chapter. It will be interesting to see how she is now that her best friend is gone. - Copper5


Thanks for commenting, guys. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:49, April 17, 2010 (UTC)


Surprising, yes, do I like Al more? Yes. Do I like C-Bass any better, not really. I'm beginning to see changes in him, but I wish to know why Patsy was eliminated. Once I know, most likely I'll be fine with C-Bass. Anyway, I really hope that Audrey II wins, now. She's gotten further then I ever thought she would. I'm glad she's still in. She's probably my favorite character. Goldenshane 17:44, April 19, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for commenting, Shane. I like to know what everyone's thinking. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:52, April 19, 2010 (UTC)


Great chapter, Sprink! I see Dante's being the same old jerk he always was, but I have to say that Creigh's right. Though, Creigh could have just won and given the money to Dante, xDDD! Epic failure, Creigh! xD --DJ Spenstar! 19:55, April 19, 2010 (UTC)


Another good chapter, Sprink. Not sure why, but I liked this one more than I usually like your chapters. That's not to say that I don't enjoy the other chapters, because I really do. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 19:57, April 19, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. I'm really glad you guys liked this chapter. As a little piece of my heart goes into each one. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:01, April 19, 2010 (UTC)


Final NineEdit

Nice chappy! I knew that either Creigh or Sky Lynn would leave and I was answered. It was one of my favorites and Al finally talked! Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:36, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Fanny. I'm glad you liked the chapter. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:47, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

You know I loved the chapter, so I'm not going to type it. XD BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 20:52, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

You know I appreciate your opinion, so I'm not even going to type it. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:54, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Another awesome chappy, Sprink! Lots of good character development, and I loved Saka- ...Renee and the jungle cat. XD Feel so bad for Creigh, as he really would have been deserving of the win. :( Can't wait for more!!! *sits down with popcorn and waits for next monday XD* --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 21:00, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well, slowly but surely, my favorites are dropping, one-by-dramatically eliminated one. I'm not really sure who I want to win, now. Yancy may be my favorite, of the ones left, but I don't really want him to win. Hmmm, I suppose I want Emmy to win. It was a great chapter, nevertheless. I did notice that when Sky Lynn was talking about not trusting Dante, you left off a 't', so it says 'rust'. Just a heads up. Also, I think Sky Lynn's time is coming. TDIwriter 21:06, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, both. I think a lot of the seeming winner types are gone... Anyway, thanks for pointing out the rust. I'll fix that right now. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:32, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Im still confused by Patsy's elimination. All in all good chapter. - Copper5

Great chapter! Wow, we're already at the final 9. That was quick. I had a feeling Creigh would be next. That was awfully nice of him to sacrifice himself, but I'm not sure if it was worth it. I for one am not entirely convinced that Dante is telling the truth. Only time will tell... -Lalainee 01:08, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. :) *shifty eyes* SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:16, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Good chapter. Al for the win! Turnertang 19:56, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I got a song for Isaiah! It isn't the best theme I've chosen, but it works for him enough. The song is titled "Everybody's Fool" by Evanescence. I chose it because of how Dante tricked the rest of the Onslaught into believing Isaiah was something he really is far from, and Isaiah didn't know why. The big problem is that Dante's role in the song is filled by a "she" pronoun, but oh well, it's Dante anyway.- The Anonymous User 23:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

No! Not Creigh! :( Ah well, besides Creigh leaving, it was epic. I have a strange feeling Dante is Jonny fairplaying his way to the finals. ><;; i cant wait to see dante slip up and lose, but if he IS dying for real, i say let him win. OR just win urself and give dante the money. :P epic though. Reddy!!:) :( :D xD DX >:D ;( ;)Reddy loves emotioncons. 23:48, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reddy... THANK YOU!! I'm not the only one who thinks that someone else should win and use the money to help Dante! --DJ Spenstar! 23:55, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Reddy. I like Creigh, too. T_T Anyway, thanks for your comments, everyone. Also, TAU, I'll be sure to look up that song when I can. If I get it, I'll post it until anyone can find a better one. I've seen some perfect songs for other characters that say she instead of he. Like 'Slide' for Tsuyoshi by The Googoo Dolls... It talked about being disowned for some reason I don't remember. So... I know how that is. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:01, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Also, now that the game is halfway over, I feel like I know a lot about everyone except Willow and Sky Lynn. I love Willow, but I'm not even sure why. And Sky Lynn seems to only be a Dante hater and provider of the occasional strange animal trick. I'm worried they might not have their time to shine because I have a feeling a girl is going home next... -Lalainee 17:19, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I share everyone else's slight paranoia that Dante hasn't changed at all, and is still going to smirk, prank, lie, and decieve his way to the finals. But even if he is, no human being deserves to die, and it sure was nice of Creigh to sacrifice his time on the show. Renee is definitely improving, and Audrey Eye Eye is hysterical.

I KNEW IT, *votes Dante*. Sad about C-Bass i grew to not hate him XD. Umm, Al had some good moments. Oh And Dante should get a disease after the show >:). I am evil--Kenzen Eleven! 17:38, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Good chapter though it was depressing to me since Al almost got out. Turnertang 19:28, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

C-Bass finally got what he deserved! However, he was smart in the end, I'll give him that. Any who, this was a great chapter, and I knew you'd never go as far as to kill someone (Dante) But man, Dante has no heart. However, this was an awesome chapter! Goldenshane 19:59, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Once again, good chapter. I'm actually starting to like Al. I'm trying my hardest to change the way his voice sounds in my hand, and it's working. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 20:09, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dante Is so Evil!!!!!!! - Copper5

Thanks for your comments. Shane wants Dante dead? O_O (JK, I know what you meant) Anyway, I'm glad you like Al, now. He never had an annoying voice in my head, but I can see why you might think that way. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:26, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, I did not see that coming. I was scared when it became between Al and Sebastian (as you know Al is my fav). Great chappy! Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:29, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. My. God! Sebastian was right about Dante! And so was Sky Lyn and Topher! oh god, I'm sorry I ever disliked C-bass now. T_T T_T T_T I can't believe Dante actually sank that low by lying about dying. I've never hated a character this much before, but... He deserves, at the very least, another beating from Topher. JK maybe. Aside from that, chappy was epic. --DJ Spenstar! 20:44, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

I really loved this chapter. In my mind, Sebastian has deserved this for some time. True, he was one of only two people who weren't fooled by Dante, (if you count Sky Lynn), but he's been a major pain. Looks like Dante has this game in the game, unless he does something stupid to ruin everything. I have a feeling Sky Lynn is either going home soon, or Emmy will finally listen, and break away from Dante. I don't think anyone is safe, at this point. Dante has the power to get rid of whoever he wants, but if he slips, he's gone for sure. TDIwriter 21:19, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks to the above three commentors. I always appreciate speculation/thoughts on what happened. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:35, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ohohoho, I KNEW IT! Well, this means that Dante officially trumps Missy as your most diabolical villain. An as for Sebastian, I agree with what TDIwriter is saying. He made too many mistakes, and it was inevitable that someone would eventually air his dirty laundry. I'm almost certain a girl is going home next week, since there are 5 girls and 3 guys left, but this is a Sprinklemist story, so who knows what might happen. -Lalainee 22:23, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

I suppose that's true. He wasn't intentionally hurting people, but he did cause problems for people, that really opened him up for something like this to happen. Thanks for commenting, Lalainee. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:54, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

OMG I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU DANTE I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU. :'( Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 00:51, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

O_O I'm sorry. T_T SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:00, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Shiver me timbers! Dante should be in the brig, not Topher. Boring sig. 15:57, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe that is where he belongs, but he didn't physically do enough to be disqualified. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:13, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this was a good chapter, though Dante seems like he wants to kill Emmy now. I wonder how Emmy will react. Goldenshane 16:41, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Shane. I'm glad you liked this one. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:58, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think I have a theory about this story now. I get the feeling that none of the characters will end up in a relationship with another character at the end. I've just been noticing things like that (Emmy and Isaiah hook up, Isaiah is voted out and defamed; Stacy and Logan hook up, Stacy is voted out and defamed while Logan is pissed at Sebastian; Sebastian likes Marguerite, Marguerite is voted out for rejecting Sebastian; Topher likes Emmy and hates Dante, Dante is voted out, almost hits Emmy, Topher mauls Dante and is arrested in Dante's place; Sky Lynn shows signs of liking Creigh, Creigh is voted out; Dante abuses and dates Emmy, Dante is voted out for good and threatens Emmy; Renee has liked Yancy forever, Yancy never noticed, now she doesn't seem pleased with him anymore...)- The Anonymous User 19:15, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Great chapter! I wish Chef was in it more though because Chef is awesome. Al is going all the way. Turnertang 19:50, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't see that coming. Great chapter, and I'm really glad Dante's gone. I really hope he doesn't get the money from Emmy though. --DJ Spenstar! 19:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for posting your theory. I will give no word on what happens from this point on, but it should be obvious that this story isn't as romantic as saaaaaay... Total Drama Reality. XD I did that on purpose, as that competition seemed to bring a lot of couples together, while this one has kept them apart, as it is far more intense (even though TDR had its moments). I'm not trying to make any statements, really, but it's partly to show that these stories don't need to be just about romance, or have like 18 of them (which I'm not referring to any stories but my own). There are other themes to draw on. I didn't want to rely too much on relationships, and I feel I may have in my first two stories (though it was intentional in TDR). If anyone's relationship survives what happened in the contest... I guess it was meant to be. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:55, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my gosh, great chappy Sprink. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:26, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks to the above commenters. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:51, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Woohoo, Dante's gone! *confetti rains down* But poor Emmy is still in danger. When Dante suggests that the two of them go looking for Chef at the beach, and Emmy pauses to think when he asks if he's questioning her, did she stop to think that if they look in the wrong place, she could sabotage Dante's chances at winning immunity and therefore vote him out? That's the impression I got anyway. Unless of course, she was just scared to voice her opinion. -Lalainee 21:33, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. You got it right, Lalainee. She wanted him to lose invincibility. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:36, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm scared for Emmy if she wins. Umm, Dante deserved it. Scary rant in 3...2...1... DANTE GOT WHAT HE DESERVED AND HE SHOULD BELONG IN AN INSANE ASYLUM. Scary rant over XD--Kenzen Eleven! 23:03, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I knew it! I knew dante was lying (I dont think i commented on the other chappy XD). Sweet that Dante was eliminated, but i would hate for Emmy to win now. As the saying goes, i believe, "One bad apple spoils the bunch". Dante has definitly made his mark in sprink's stories, a huge one too. and, on an unrelated not; Wooohooo!!! Final seven! Cant wait for next chappy :) Reddy!!:) :( :D xD DX >:D ;( ;)Reddy loves emotioncons. 00:36, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome chapter! Dante deserved it all the way. I guess I'd have to say I'm rooting for Renee now, and Willow is kinda turning into Reginald...Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 01:38, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks to the two above commenters. I somehow doubt that anyone wanted Dante to stay. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:40, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

NOOOO!!! NOT DANTE!!!! :'( ...... XD, JK. I'm so glad he left. I thought he was okay for the first few chapters, but then he went downhill fast. Al is rapidly rising in the character ranks, for his annoying voice no longer bothers me. Renee bores me, Yancy... I just don't like him, for whatever reason (I don't really dislike him, either), Willow's alright, and the rest of them I like. Sky Lynn is my favorite, no contest. Anyway, really good chapter. Can't wait to read the rest of the story. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 11:17, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Nonny. I'm glad you like somebody. XD You liked Dante at first, and Al not at all. That switched around. I was kind of surprised that anyone liked Dante at the beginning, but I guess I'm glad as he is meant to be charming to at least some contestants, at first. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 15:10, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm on team AI. Although he's not using the money to 'help a charity' or whatever, he's still really cool and has good intentions, so I'm rooting for him to win. I'm personally glad Dante got eliminated in this episode...he and Emmy's relationship is totally unhealthy. XD Anyways, great chapter overall, and I hope to see more (yeah, I read this one, too...plus, I finished reading Total Drama Reality -- while I was rooting for "iRene", I was okay with Tsuyoshi's win). --TDIFan13 (My Talk and My Contributions!) 01:50, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, TDIFan. I'm glad you're all caught up. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:13, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I caught up with the latest two chapters Sprink, and honestly, I'm glad I didn't have to wait to read one after reading the other. The two chapters were very realistic, like I said about the latest TDTT, and it had a lot of interesting turning-points. Sebastian and Dante.... I'll miss Sebastian, but not Dante, to be entirely honest. BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 22:54, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

That's understandable. I'm glad yo liked it, and thanks for commenting. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:00, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

I loved this chapter, and what if Dante was still on the island? XD Goldenshane 16:43, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Then Al was right. O_O XD Thanks for commenting/reading. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:21, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think Al is hallucinating, or just plain paranoid. I doubt even Dante would somehow get back to the island from the loser resort or wherever. Speaking of which...any reason for no loser visit in this season? We are almost done with the third quarter of the story, this is unprecedented for you.- The Anonymous User 19:30, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

The reason is partly TDTT and partly a lack of solid ideas for loser stories. I thought of doing a series of vignettes, but I couldn't figure out stories for everyone or a way to pull it off, or when for their story to take place. Al was paranoid in the beginning of the chapter. He's not exactly used to being treated like he was last chapter. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:44, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I could help out with the loser vignettes if you want. I think I could give you some ideas, and that way make up for my shortage of decent character themes (Why do Al, Willow and Yancy have to still be in?!). I think I have an idea at least for someone like Topher, and maybe one for Logan and Sebastian.- The Anonymous User 19:47, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

So you like the vignette idea. It would be set up like with their name, and then like a little part of something they experienced after leaving the show. If you want to give suggestions for ideas, please do so on ff.net. I do have ideas for several people, though. Probably Logan, Frederick, Isaiah, Stacy, Logan, and Creigh have my most solid ideas. Beau has a mini one, so does Hae Won, and Sebastian. But I'm open for ideas you had. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:52, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think if you have ideas, you should go with them. I think I could have an idea for Marguerite at least, and maybe one for Patsy. I think I will mull them over a bit in my head and wait for them to flesh out.- The Anonymous User 19:58, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Another good chapter. I'm not too upset that Renee was eliminated, as she never stood out for me, too much. I like Willow more after this chapter, personally, but Sky Lynn is still my fave. Sky Lynn is like some sort of unstoppable force out on the challenge field, though... --20:11, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I might do that before the finale, then, so that everyone that is eliminated gets a story. It would be more honing in on a specific significant event. Thanks for supporting the idea. Nonny, thanks. :) Sky Lynn also is an unstopable force as your favorite, too. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is creepy. I wrote my own TDT today, and made Willow and Renee the final two, and Renee was eliminated. That was creepy but good chappy! Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:26, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

You wrote your own TDT? O_O And Willow and Renee were the bottom two... That is weird. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:40, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, to be honest, I'm not very good at writing comments on your chapters... But I'll try. Sprinklemist... Err, Sprink. Renee's elimination was *Voice cracks* very sad. Sky Lynn is like *Voice cracks again* so strong in those challenges. One of my favorite *Burps the weird... err, word* chapters. Wow that was really awkward. XD BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 21:04, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Poor Renne! My heart goes out to her! - Copper5

XD Bocaj. Nice attempt. Thanks for caring (and Copper, too). SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:12, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Too bad Renee left, but the story is somewhat happier with Dante gone. --DJ Spenstar! 21:24, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Spenny. Dante was the root of a lot of the story's darkness, the source of a lot of the conflicts, and the source of a lot of the negativity. With him gone, all that remains are the effects of some of the things he did for darkness. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:06, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Me and Al are alike. I always ask people if they're awake and if they say no. I say okay and try to go back to sleep. Turnertang 19:31, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

There was a slight hiccup with the latest chapter when I was working on it. I lost a lot of it when the window stopped working for a minute. I kept writing, though I forgot some of the things I had written about before I lost it. It's about halfway done, and I'll work on it later, today. It'll get done, today. :) I'm trying to give each remaining character some story in this one. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:38, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's I

was epic! --DJ Spenstar! 21:05, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Heading Towards the EndEdit

Great chappy! Sky Lynn left. Hooray! Five left. Can't wait for more. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 21:13, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

I take it you didn't like Sky Lynn? Or you like that there's five left? Anyway, thanks for reading, Fanny and Spenny. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:17, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Chris made me LOL. XDD All around me are familliar faces, worn out places, worn out faces... 21:27, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

I liked Sky Lynn in the beginning but then she won all the challenges and I started to dislike her. And, I like the final five! Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 21:30, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Great chappy, as usual Sprink. You kept me on the edge of my seat during the elimination once again, as I'm rooting for Willow, for obvious reasons, and I'm also rooting for Al, Emmy, Yancy, and Audrey II. If one of them didn't win I don't know what I'd do. XD BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 21:31, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I forgot. I wrote my own TDT again today and Sky Lynn left but Emmy was in the bottom two. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 21:35, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

NO!!! Not Sky Lynn!!! She was my fave!!!! IDK who I'm rooting for, now. Anyway, that stuff with Chris having a slumber party with the other guys was funny, and it was a good chapter, overall. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 21:42, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Weird, Fanny. XD Thanks, Chim. Chris was crazy this time. XD If one of those people don't win, Bocaj, there's something wrong... Or a giant twist in the future. Thanks and sorry, Nonny. I'm glad you liked the Chris stuff. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:46, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

That was such a humorous chapter. Chris, Audrey and Emmy, Yancy, Chris, Al, Chris, did I say Chris? If not, Chris. They were all funny. One thing is, SkyLynn did seem to have an unfair advantage. But I liked her, though. Goldenshane 21:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

So you liked Chris? XD I gess it was unfair, but not her fault. She only won one individual challenge because of it. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

I can safely say I saw this coming. I knew Sky Lynn would be eliminated this time...either her or Audrey II, but the latter was unlikely because she doesn't do anything. Sky Lynn was kinda more Stevie than Waterlily in the merge, with all the winning and the coming in sixth and stuff. Unfortunately, I liked her, and now I can't root for anyone but Yancy, and even he's pushing it.- The Anonymous User 23:38, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about eliminating SL, but thanks for commenting. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 12:31, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Al is a pretty deep man just like me except the part about being deep and I don't wear a bathing suit under my clothes. Turnertang 19:40, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

XD THat was profoundly deep, Turnertang. Thanks for commenting. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:43, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Al is now my fav along with Audrey II. I dislike Yancy now, but I'm really annoyed with Willow. I mean, if Yancy asked why she liked him, she'd just say that he's hot. Willow's extremely shallow, and I don't like shallow types. Yancy, he seems like he loves the attention and seems to be ignoring Al a little bit. Audrey II, I still love her. I think that she realized that she does love Al, but the former feelings for Yancy, and Beau to a certain extent, are still there, like whenever Yancy is shirtless, thoughts or Yancy swarm her head, so she needs to sort those out. I think she still loves Al, though. Al, is now my favorite, although Audrey II is close behind. Al is like me, a nice guy who girls will never go after simply because I'm not hot. Anyway, I'll go into why I also like Audrey II, you see, I have problems like her, with the thoughts and feelings, and I need to sort those out. I have crushes on like, three girls. XD But there is one girl whom I do like more. However she's a bit like Willow, shallow, though she does care for me, I guess that's good. XD Anyway, time to talk about Emmy, I loved Emmy, and I'm sad to see her go. But I think she made the most mature choice. She also broke bonds that tied her to the Dante related issues. She also really wasn't shallow. That's another reason I liked her. Goldenshane 15:06, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the in depth thoughts, Shane. I think each girl feels initial attraction is important. Sure, Al isn't unattractive, but I think it mostly lies in their view of him being like the DJ big brother type. Yancy doesn't enjoy the attention, as he is oblivious to it. He is getting better at reading Al, though. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 15:16, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I have to say, that was one I read, that DID surpise me. User:Darkdonpatch

I hated the end Audrey, Al WHY..... I am starting to dislike Yancy for no real reason. I liked the end with Emmy saying they needed it more.... Willow is starting to get on my nerves XD--Kenzen Eleven! 17:05, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

That's good, Dark. I finally surprised you. Thanks for reading, guys. I'm glad you liked and hated the end, Kenzen. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:27, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Even though I haven't caught up, and I usually read your stories when there finished User:Darkdonpatch

Awwww Audrey and Al! - Copper5

I'm guessing you're sad they broke up or you thought they were a cute couple. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:48, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Loved this chapter! Yay at AlxAudrey II, T_T at their breakup. Though Al is really understanding and a really nice guy, which makes Al my new favorite. --DJ Spenstar! 19:56, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Um, what's going on with Chris and Yancy right now? Is it what I think it is? If so, your really starting to scare me... With the lights out, it's less dangerous. Here we are now, entertain us 20:04, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Spenny, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Al is really understanding, though he's hard on himself. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:05, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, tdirm. IDK what it is. I'm thinking of making it a misunderstanding. That part was really iffy to me, as to whether I should include it or not. Please don't run away because of it, as I don't plan to write a dirty story at all. Remember, the story is PG-13 and that's about as lewd as it will get. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:10, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Great chappy! This might be creepy but I wrote another TDT chappy today and Emmy and Audrey II were in the final two but Audrey II left. I'm nervous for Al but I'll just have to wait and see. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:40, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I really liked the chapter, as usual. Well, these comments are sort of getting redundant. I wonder why... Mayb because it's a weekly thing?

Final 4, woohoo! Goodness, Yancy's comment was pretty racy, I wasn't expecting that. I laughed though, since it was pretty funny. I'm not too upset to see Emmy go, since she seemed to be fading away anyway. At this point, I think I might be rooting for Audrey II, but I have no idea who's going home next week. It could be anyone. Great chapter! -Lalainee 21:45, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. I guess that's as racy as my stories are ever gonna get. Yancy just has... no filter on certain things that he doesn't quite understand... It wasn't meant to offend, just an attempt at humor. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:54, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Phew, I'm finally caught up on chapters! I have to say, Yancy is still my favorite (still in the game). Al and Audrey II? Wowzers. Everyone still in the game, I was sure they would be early outs.I can't believe my first final three guess is still in play...Though, I'm 99% sure it'll be out next week. TDIwriter 22:44, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'm glad you're all caught up. I always thought Al and Audrey II would be a good couple... Anyway, thanks for commenting. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:47, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

No problem, pal. -Off to read TDTT- TDIwriter 22:55, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Great chapter as usual, I agree with the Emmy leaving decision. I think she had enough character build up. Spikes793 23:21, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for commenting, Spikes. Her story was done, I guess. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:32, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

That was a good chapter but to me Emmy getting eliminated seemed random because she never asked to be eliminated or anything so she randomly got eliminated. Turnertang 01:05, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Just because it wasn't shown doesn't mean it didn't happen. But thanks for reading. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:07, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

What about Dante's threat to Emmy? Boring sig. 11:21, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

She mentioned toward the end that she didn't want t win the money in case she felt pressured to carry out his threat. She figures he wasn't seriously going to hurt her. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:15, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

NUUUUUU MEH TWOEY'S GONE!!! xDDDD! Great Chapter, Yancy is now my favorite for his selfless and disturbing actions to remedy Audrey II and Al. --DJ Spenstar! 14:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about Twoey. It had to happen sometime... Thanks for reading. Yancy was pretty disturbing this time. XD I hope it wasn't overly traumatic. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 14:50, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Another good chapter, Sprink. You really never disappoint. You can amaze, but you can never disappoint. I think, out of the three remaining, I'm rooting for Al, surprisingly. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 15:07, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I didn't even notice I won the final three contest! XD I'll have my character to you later today, possibly tomorrow. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 15:08, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I remember back when Beau was helping Yancy with girls, and now Yancy is the one helping someone else. -Sniffle- They grow up, so fast. I figured it would be Al or Yancy eliminated, as you already eliminated three girls in a row, and I remembered back to Total Drama Reality, when you said Priscilla was originally going to be eliminated after Naomi, and then Micky D. would place sixth, but you didn't want to eliminate four girls in a row. This was a nice chapter, though, I probably won't look at Yancy the same...And Al has feelings, instead of being a chillaxed Brent. That's cool, maaaaaan. I don't hate Willow like I used to, but I still don't really care for Audrey. THough, her 'hot and heavy' line was funny. Final three! I am rooting for Yancy, of course. TDIwriter 15:34, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I don't know who to root for now. I want to root for Yancy, but I doubt he will win somehow; I like Al, think he has a shot at winning, but don't really want him to win as it is expected, and I want Willow to win because that would support a theory I have, but I don't like her as much as I like Yancy. I'm so confused! I haven't known who to root for since Creigh's elimination!- The Anonymous User 15:41, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for commenting, guys. That's really nice of you to say, Nonny. I enjoy having your support. TDIwriter, I'm glad you brought up Yancy selflessly helping someone else. It sounds like something Beau would do, more likely than early Yancy. It shows that Yancy has grown as a person/character. I did that intentionally as a reflection of Beau, but I didn't want to flat out say it. TAU, I appreciate that you're reading, anyway. I guess you can't have a favorite favorite win every time I write a story. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 15:46, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this chapter was pure sweetness. Willow's still in, hmm. To be surprised, I thought I was going to be completely off when I guessed she'd win, but maybe she will, maybe she will. Al is still an awesome character, and I guess Yancy is okay. Go Sprinkles! XD BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 16:46, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Bocaj. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:13, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

No! Audrey II Is gone :(. - Copper5

Sorry. I'm glad you liked her, though, and I hope you liked my portrayal of her. She made it pretty far. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I'M BACK! MY INTERNET IS WORKING. Great chappy. Glad Al is still in. It's him or Willow should win. Wait, let me refrase that. Willow or Al should win. xD Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 21:25, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad your internet is working again. I can't believe this is almost over. O_O SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:14, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, just who I suspected would be in the final two...good chapter. Boring sig. 16:05, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. XD at the Al and Yancy support sections. I'll add a chat section under it, as I like the chatting to be at the very bottom. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:24, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this has gone by quick. Hmm, I honestly don't care that Willow was eliminated. I'm pleased with whoever makes it to All-Stars. Great chapter. I'm glad you didn't reuse the storyline of the friend of the other friend choosing the weaker contestant (Tsuyoshi, Yi Min, and Irene). Umm, I don't know what else to say. JK I know just what to say. Sprink is epic! BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 16:38, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment Bocaj. I'm glad you liked it. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 17:25, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

SIGN IF YOU SUPPORT AL!Edit

  1. Boring sig. 16:05, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  2. --Kenzen Eleven!40px 16:25, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Al! Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:30, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 21:05, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  5. --HINT:A AWESOME USER,that loves Chatango and Chatting but wonders,what's with Cyan? 21:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  6. -Lalainee 21:58, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 03:31, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
  8. Cards777LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶ 13:06, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

SIGN IF YOU SUPPORT YANCY!Edit

  1. - The Anonymous User 19:20, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  2. - DJ Spenstar! 19:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  3. --Hear ye! Hear ye! Lady Jessica is in town! 20:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  4. --Copper5

Penultimate Chat Edit

Talk about the latest chapter and stuff, or what you think will happen next. Whatever. Thanks to all my readers. You guys, rock. There will be a special Playa des Losers chapter before the finale. I'll try to get that up this week. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:27, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

NOOO!!! Another theory gone awry! Why do I do this? Still a decent chapter, bringing out the best in Al, the funniest in Willow, and the last leg of Yancy's development. I look forward to the finale, and seeing the losers once again.- The Anonymous User 19:23, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I really appreciate theories, though. There have been quite a few floating around. Thanks for reading/being so supportive. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:29, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah!! GO YANCY!!! Great chapter, too --DJ Spenstar! 19:45, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

OMG, Sprink is pulling a reverse Nalyd!!!

  • Sprink - Girl, Boy, Boy
  • Nalyd - Boy, Girl, Girl

XD --Koops is here! Let's sit down and talk! What I do here! Let's blog!

I decided a boy would win before TDAmazon was over, so... I didn't do that on purpose. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:17, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

GO AL! GO AL! GO AL! GO AL! Al has to win. I'm excited he made it this far. Truthfully, I think Yancy is going to win, but I'd rather have it be Al. Good chappy! Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 20:29, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wierd...right? Edit

As some of you whom who read my blog post a few weeks ago, I started a theroy of Al or Yancy winning...Well, here we are! Jason was here. 50px 23:19, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

xD. That is so true Jason! Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 23:21, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Um...wow, I picked Yancy to win from a hat when I made my guess, and now he's actually in the final 2? O_o All around me are familliar faces, worn out places, worn out faces... 10:59, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

that was a very interesting challenge. Al is going to win it all! Turnertang 19:59, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

How do they all know Logan, now? Boring sig. 18:45, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

So Creigh's a cynic now? It seems like a really drastic shift in character for him, but I liked the overall chapter. I do wish that Sebastian, Sky Lynn and Topher were all present to oppose Dante at once, but oh well, you can't always get the most epic scenes all the time.- The Anonymous User 19:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wasn't it Chris, Stacy, and Sebastian who knew Logan? I think they're the only ones. Chris is the only one of those three that ever had a problem remembering him. Creigh as a cynic... If you really think about how he felt in giving up his shot at the most important thing in his life, and then finding out that it was for someone who manipulated him... It'd be devestating. He hasn't really dealt with the sorts of things he's dealt with on the show, before, and when you think back to his story about losing his leg, he was a cynic then. After something else devestated him. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:38, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Great loser chapter Sprink... I think I just said the word 'loser' in a sentence about your story. Sorry. I'm glad everyones' basically a lot happier. Also, sorry I haven't been on much lately. My parents have been busy with some things on here, but they're almost done, I think. I'll make up for my absence as soon as I can. BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 20:07, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Great loser-based chapter, Sprink! --DJ Spenstar! 20:07, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, guys. Bocaj, that's fine. Let them take the time they need. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:09, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Not a bad chapter, Hae Won was AWESOME! Dante getting bullied was awesome. Though Creigh and Isaiah's change in personality is a little...unsettling. Anyway, this was a good chapter. I liked it. Goldenshane 21:36, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Isaiah and Creigh's personality changes were planned for a while. I have had emotionally scarred characters, before. It's usually not something outside of a bio, or it's resolved quickly. I don't mean to bother my readers with it, but things happened this time that were darker than ever. There are going to be aftereffects from it, I'd think. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:56, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Almost everyone got screwed up in this story,mainly Creigh,Sprink, that was almost like Twisted Metal x2! User:Darkdonpatch

I guess... Most learned something, or have a happy ending, I think. Creigh and Isaiah seem to be the only ones who are currently messed up, though. T_T BTW, nice comparison. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 00:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow...This was the most depressing Sprink chapter ever, no offense though. Boring sig. 20:57, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

No offense taken, it had its moments... I hope you liked it, anyway. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 21:03, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I now want Criegh and Isaihah in All-Stars, I hope on of them is or both and if they are i want one of them to win..... It was sad yet great all at the same time--Kenzen Eleven!40px 23:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks a lot Kenzen. I'm glad you liked it. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:46, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Sprink...but I didn't like this chapter much. It didn't show any character development at all, really, just what happened to the contestants after they got voted off. I was also a bit annoyed by the fact that Chris interrupted the story countless times, and really just pissed off at the characters for what they did in the chapter. I hope I said this polite enough. Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 03:16, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

IDK. You can have your opinion, sorry I didn't deliver the way you would have liked. I felt there was plenty of character development (from Creigh, Isaiah, Stacy and Logan, and some more story for some others that could use some. Not everyone would develop, though). It was either Chris' interruptions (or hosting), or random switches between character scenes. Thanks for reading though. I hope it didn't scar you. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 03:26, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Great finale, Sprink. A really good season, overall. I can't wait for Wilderness. --Hey, it's Anonymos! Hurry up and say hi! It's nothing illegal! I swear! 16:40, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

YAY!! Al won!! I thought that he wouldn't win because of what Dante said and the thing that Yancy did to him, but anyway great chapter! Cards777LOVESWICKED!! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶ 16:45, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, guys. :) Cards, I had to add a little suspense. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:47, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome ending! When will Wilderness begin? - Copper5

Thanks, Copper. Next Monday. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 16:53, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

YAY! AL WON! I hoped that Al would win ever since Sky Lynn got voted out, I'm glad I got what I wanted. XD Goldenshane 18:01, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'm glad you liked it, too. I know Yancy had fans, too, so I hope they take it okay. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 18:03, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes! Al won! I wanted Audrey II to win at first but after she got eliminated I hoped Al would win. Oweguy is somewhere on Plastic Beach - Or not Or maybe I am 18:52, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent finale, good buddy. I liked the challenge, a lot. I was hoping Yancy would win, but Al is cool, too. And so ends another classic Sprinklemist story. I think I would place Tropics above Boney Island, not slightly below Reality, which I still feel is your best work. Cheers, and here's to Total Drama Wilderness. TDIwriter 19:36, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Great finale! I wanted Yancy to win... but oh well. Nice job! --DJ Spenstar! 20:07, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks so much for your support, guys, throughout my stories. I don't feel who wins is the most important thing, at least with my stories. It was a tougher finale to make interesting, as I couldn't have someone let the other win thre times in a row, so I tried to think of a way to make it suspenseful, anyway. Thanks, again to all my readers. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:47, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I figured I won't share my comment on the finale here, and decided to post it on my ranking blog, like I always do.- The Anonymous User 19:54, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

That's okay. I replied in a blog comment. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:03, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes! Dante's tactics didn't work this time! Amazing job on the finale. I'm looking forward to TDW. --TDIFan13 (My Talk and My Contributions!) 22:48, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Great finale, Sprink. I'm glad a fan favorite won, for once. Go Al! I honestly Yancy to win a little bit more, though, but it was still a great chapter. It had a weird kind of ending though... I'm not sure. It didn't like TD:BI and TDR did, but it was still great. Great job on a great story, Sprink. BocaJ is Here! I decided to ditch the month signatures... Because I did! 22:52, June 14, 2010 (UTC) :)


Oh my gosh, thank you Sprink. Al won! EEEE! He's been my favorite since the beginning! WOOO! YEAH! YEAH! YEAH! UH HUH! OH NO! OH YES! AL ROCKS! EAT THAT YANCY! UH HUH! WOO! and scene. Awesome finale. I literally screamed when Al won. xD. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 22:53, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for commenting, guys. I don't think all my stories can end with one person deciding the other should win. I tried to make it suspenseful while still more competitive. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:55, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Fanny. Though you can be more respectful to Yancy fans. Do you know who you want in All-Stars from this story, or do you want more time to decide? SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:57, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

xD. Sorry about the Yancy part. Hmm. I would first put Al in the all-star story, but I might need more time to decide. I have some other options. Fanfiction2010 ☆Legendary Unison buddies!!! BUNDLES OF ODDNESS EVERYWHERE! 23:01, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I removed the heading, just in case it would spoil someone. I would prefer a non-winner, but I could make Al work. Let me know when you decide. You have time. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:09, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I hope the reunion sees Frederick, Creigh, and Isaiah happy again, and Dante dead nicer. Congrats, Al. Here's to a Toby/Quog win. Boring sig. 01:08, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Great chapter! Its the first time my favorite character won but he stopped talking funny but he still won. Can't wait for the reunion! Turnertang 01:30, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments. I have plans for each of those three characters, Nad. I do believe that Frederick is happiest when he's either alone or making other miserable. XD I'm glad your favorite won, Turnertang. He talks funny minorly, now, but I don't think he could talk that way the whole time without grating a lot of peoples nerves. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 02:50, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Um...I mentioned 7 characters; which 3? XD Boring sig. 17:21, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

THe first three you listed. THough I have plans for everyone in some way, I think. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 18:46, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yay Al! Great finale, Sprink! It's funny because at the beginning of the competition, I thought Al would be a really early out, like 4th or 5th. Same for Willow actually. Anyway, I'm so pumped for Wilderness because it will bring us that much closer to All Stars! I'm so excited for All Stars, you have no idea. -Lalainee 22:40, June 16, 2010 (UTC) 22:22, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Lalainee. I'm excited for it, too, because it's presenting new chapters in most of the characters' lives. I have a lot of it mapped out. I hope to write them from new angles to keep them fresh, but still the same feel, so they don't feel like brand new characters... Anyway, I'm excited for it, too. XD I'm also excited to start Wilderness. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 23:55, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I just read the trivia...Couldn't you have just made a blog post on the signs of an abusive relationship? Boring sig. 00:51, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

A. Who would read that? and B. I like my stories to have meaning, and a theme. TD:BI was about acceptance dealing with a family member of some sort (the final four, at least). TDR was about acceptance of self (in most cases). TDT was about an abusive relationship. There are other elements in the story so it isn't overwhelming to the reader (hopefully), but that's what I wanted to write a story about, so I did. SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:24, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

...Why do I have a feeling Creigh will be back for All-Stars? Nad331 18:40, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! Audrey II answerd my question! Thanks Sprink :) - Copper5

You're welcome Copper. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 19:30, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

And with that, the one Sprink character without a balance of good and bad qualities is redeemed. XD Great reunion all around, Sprink! I got mentioned, there was a polar bear, Dante got redeemed, Al has a sarong (*doesn't know what a sarong is XD*), Janice is still creepy, I MISS CREIGH :( , Topher be gettin' better, there was Eduardo talk, and overall it was awesome!!! What a way to wrap up a great series. :D --Sunshineandravioli- Legendary Pixie! RAVIOLI EVERYWHERE! 20:20, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

A sarong is a towel/skirt thingy. Anyway, I LOVED this reunion! I was mentioned! Goldenshane 20:31, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

What a reunion this has been! I am glad the loose ends in the story have been tied up, and some important things were revealed! I'm glad Dante had a reason for his cruelty, and I guess that's why you didn't expect the Topher+Sebastian/Dante conflict like I did. I do think it would have been nice to see Creigh appear, but I understand why he would not want to. I hope the Tropical portion of the All-Stars cast includes him, and a few other awesome characters (Preferrably Audrey II, Sebastian, Topher and Renee).- The Anonymous User 20:43, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments guys. I had planned Dante's reunion moment since the beginning. It felt like forever to wait to reveal it, but it seemed like the only way to do it. I'm glad this went over well. :) SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 20:53, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

I was so happy for a new Tropics chapter because I really liked this story. Al is still awesome and it was an awesome chapter! Turnertang 22:12, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Turnertang. :D SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 22:26, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. Epic conclusion to TDT, and I'm glad Dante has somewhat made up for his actions, even though it's for the exchange of his happiness. I did laugh at the bombarding of negative questions at him, though. Looks like the Complete Monster award for your canon series will be returned to Missy. Yay for Beau's identical brothers and Janice's Charlie McCarthy to her Yvette. I was really scared when I heard that Creigh wasn't there, because I thought he had, like, died or something, but it's good to know that's he's just eighteen. But wait...doesn't that mean the TD:BI and TDR relatives of TDWilderness contestants could have opted out, too? XD But the Crowning Moment of Epic for this chapter goes to..."I bought the sarong, maaaaaan." Dark clouds all around, lightning rain is pouring down! 01:37, September 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, TBTDIF. I'm glad you liked it. The bombardment of negative questions was what I planned, but I got plenty of those from the readers. XD TD:BI and TDR ones that may have turned eighteen, may have had no qualms with returnin. TDW peeps can opt out if they choose. XD SprinklemistCyan is the new green. 01:53, September 30, 2010 (UTC)

Crystal's Seal of ApprovalEdit

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" You're 30% arrogant, 30% ignorant, and 40% idiot!" " Yep, she soo has a crush on me." Nickelodeon has the best lines. XD 23:02, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sweet image, yo. I like how Logan is mostly blocked out by the bag. Also, Sky Lynn looks really pretty. TDIwriterOops, is my ego showing? 23:15, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, bro. Believe it or not, I didn't purposely place Logan there to block him, but after I drew that part I realized the irony... and liked it. XD I like this pic, but I wish I could have thought up a better background. Of course, I can always edit something better in. I find the hawk to be pretty cute, too. XD Sprinklemisthasn't changed his signature in a long time. 23:21, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I like the new image! Everyone looks great, especially Isaiah and Emmy. The hawk's pretty cute. :P Also, I think it's really funny that you can't see all of Logan's face. It's completely appropriate. XD -LalaineeOtherwise known as Liluokalani. 23:58, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Lal. XD Isaiah and Emmy were a cute couple, huh? Sprinklemisthasn't changed his signature in a long time. 00:18, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the new image. Sky Lynn is prettier than she was (well, she's always pretty). :3 I loved everyone in the pic. Poor Logan, are blocked by the bag. xD Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 00:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, Bruno. XD I'm glad Sky Lynn turned out, and everyone seems to appreciate Logan, here. XD Sprinklemisthasn't changed his signature in a long time. 00:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I like the newest image, bro. Beau's expression is pretty funny, and I enjoy the man-craziness in Audrey's eyes. TDIwriterOops, is my ego showing? 19:05, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, bro. I thought this one was a little on the 'edgy' side, but I find it pretty funny. Sprinklemisthasn't changed his signature in a long time. 19:09, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

This new image is funny! I remembered that moment from Tropics, and I've always thought that one scene would make for a funny image. Hae Won and Audrey II both have funny reactions. -LalaineeOtherwise known as Liluokalani. 20:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Lal. It stood out as something that would make a good picture, as opposed to any of the more dramatic scenes. Sprinklemisthasn't changed his signature in a long time. 20:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the 2 new pics. The one with Isaiah and Beau is hilarious. Since I read, I thought it would be funny if you did the pic. The other one with Al and Stacy is great too. :) Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 23:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. I really appreciate the support on these. :) It makes me want to do more. Sprinklemisthasn't changed his signature in a long time. 23:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sprink, you've done it again! You've brought us an exciting tropical adventure that makes people want to visit... whatever tropical island the story takes place in.

Lots of crazy characters... Patsy, the aspiring writer; Janice, the ventriloquist; Yancy, the geeky guy who deep down is actually pretty hot; Marguerite, the French lady; Sky Lynn, the girl that animals like; Renee, the girl that animals DON'T; Dante, the Jonny Fairplay of this season; Topher, obviously Chris' nephew and is a memorable character who was probably like Brandon Hantz of Survivor South Pacific even before we actually saw Brandon Hantz... and two of my favorites: Creigh, the amputee; and my personal favorite, Audrey II! Since I have autism, I was rooting for this girl to go very far, and I'm glad she did, even though she didn't win! And of course, Al, the kind of laid-back hippie-like dude who's very funny!

I'm at the beginning of Total Drama Wilderness now... once I've finished it, I'll give you my review! Keep 'em comin'! :D BadAsp No matter what, a fake is a fake, and no matter how much you try to dress it up, the real thing always wins! 14:00, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'm glad you liked this series, too, BadAsp. The stories will eventually run out, at the rate you're reading them, but I do have plenty of material for you to read, for now. I hope you enjoy my later series, too. Sprinklemisthasn't changed his signature in a long time. 14:50, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

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